It's really good, great even. It would be really sweet to see people in Marvel playing Halo, Starship Troopers and being lost in complex gameplay and it's emotional stories, past and present. Maybe they could even use the technological ideas from the game world to reverse engineer their own spaceships, weapons and other tech.

It would be really sweet to see people in Marvel playing Halo, Starship Troopers and being lost in complex gameplay and it's emotional stories, past and present. Maybe they could even use the technological ideas from the game world to reverse engineer their own spaceships, weapons and other tech.

I feel like with MC super genius intellect and super learning ability he should learn how to fight, like martial arts and other fighting skills along with better control of his powers, he'd be unstoppable!!!

The story is good and all but too fast paced for me, MC just on the same planet or solar system for thousands of years and didn't do anything much to me. I would really like to see him take a vacation from being the Emperor of the Empire for a little and go around his planets and surrounding space on an adventure and explore, seeing new planets, creatures, aliens and the greater galaxy. Maybe before the main storyline or between it, if possible.

What about an old TV series called "Kyle XY" nothing too fancy or overpowered, just a boy and girl who are clones with mild above average psionic power who escaped from a secret government program or private corporate lab, trying to live life like normal teenagers.

What about including Underworld or Twilight movies in either his homeworld or worlds he visits in the future. Or you can make it that he gets Corvinus bloodline strain from Underworld-(vampires/werewolves)

Or you can make it that he gets Corvinus bloodline strain from Underworld-(vampires/werewolves)

What about including Underworld or Twilight movies in either his homeworld or worlds he visits in the future.

What about incorporating movies like Underworld and Twilight into it maybe, that'll be cool. ;)

Good to know you're still with us.

Hmmm, interesting.

It's not bad, and as a different spin on things.

Finally back!!! Thanks for the new chapter 👍

Good to know, thanks for the reply and Happy Writing!!!😇👍

Quick question here, when are you going to continue (Mass Effect) Within the new Dawn!

This is really an Amazing read, really really hope you continue writing it. PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING!!!!!!!!!

Soooooo... True, it's sad really😔😪😥