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Sordahon

Sordahon

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Blessed be the chicken after it werden gestorben haben.

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  • Sordahon
    Sordahon4 months ago
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    I think the story has a good solid start. The MC is a bit dumb which sadly remains the entire story. I like the world background, but it has a few loopholes here and there that don't make sense. I did like the story, but around chapter 100, it started to go south. Everything suddenly starts to feel forced, like the 5 star knight who enters, which he doesn't have to and with the first dungeons. The author wanted to speed up at this point, which ruined the story for me. With the chapters around the 5 star knight, the rules for the adventure guild are no longer rules of an adventure guild and more like a work contract for a noble, but a adventure guild should give freedom and shouldn't bind the weak and empower the strong what is the point at the end? Well, not that he could enforce his own rules. xD

  • Sordahon
    Sordahon5 months ago
    Commented

    I did think the same. If you don't wanna be an adventure anymore, just stop working, throw you're id away or just accept quests don't solve them and you will get kicked out. This entire rule doesn't makes sense and stands against what an adventurer is.

  • Sordahon
    Sordahona year ago
    Replied to Infinite_Ruler

    Deep questin when I hate chines novels, why do i know a few facts about them? Ok, sorry for that, but you did jump to a wrong conclusion here. It's just that I was reading a chinese novele over the last days, and after that, I needed something normal. I did see this novel and did go to the tags and didn't see the standard chinese tags or the other ones I dislike. 1 Chapter after reading Blue Planet, my thoughts were 'it was a trap', but I did read the comments because the name of the MC was a western one. so after reading it's only a bit chinese I was like 'ok why not if it's only a touche'. chapter 2-10, where okish I think but it was outright a chinese novel. I had to stop at chapter 11 because I couldn't get past this cringe scene

  • Sordahon
    Sordahona year ago
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  • Sordahon
    Sordahona year ago
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    Well, the novel is fun. And it is really not bad, but I can't rate it really high. The writing is good, but if it gets to numbers, it's totally messed up. Thinks like 800.000.000 = 1.8 billion happen like every time it gets to numbers. The story is ok but messes up with how the characters react to the world. Like the world stands bevor an apocalypse, two kingdoms get destroyed in seconds, and it feels like nobody reacts to it. No defenses are built. There is no program to strengthen the armis, just waiting for death. The MC forces everything that leads even to his death, then gets resurrected and strengthened by what seems to be the thing that destroyed his kingdom? After death, he still forces everything. Well, the world background is ok, but nothing gets really told. Till chapter 100, only 5 races were shown, and like 3 were used in the plot. The strength system is from my point of view messed up. What I mean is that every 10 levels represents a tier. But a tier means that somebody gets stronger if he enters it what is not really given in this novel. Because one does only get 1 stat point and 100HP/ MP per level. But later, it's writing that a glass canon around lvl 100 has 100.000 HP, so we're do the 90.000 come from? Also, I find it strange that the MC with God skills and like 12.000 magic power says that he can't win against a demi-god. Does that mean that till the demigod levl, everything is an ant, and suddenly, one gets a powerup like ×10000 on all stats or what? The demi-god level was also many times rescaled in the novel. around chapter 40, demi-gods were on the same level as level 30 worldbosses. Around chapter 60, demi-gods are strong enough to win against 4 level 60 world bosses, and at chapter 100, they are around level 100 Worldbosses? If I got something wrong, I'm sorry, but that is how I see it. I will continue to read the novel, and maybe later, I can rewrite a few parts around the power system. (and I hope around the number quality) And like I did write at the start, the novel is really not bad.

  • Sordahon
    Sordahona year ago
    Posted

    The writing quality is good, but how the MC acts doesn't fit with the setting. Number 1 player gets killed and reincarnates as an npc who should get stronger each death but gets also stronger each kill that isn't really what was written in the description. He talks like he was killed 10000 times, and he has to revenge all his npc brothers, which is just dumb. The players are more written like they are the npc. I mean, a player is immortal, and they beg him for their life, an immortal begging for his life is just strange. The MC says one thing to a player, and the player reacts like he knows that he is a dead and reincarnated player. The MC finds a demon who wants to sign a contract in promises of power, and the MC says instantly yes, I mean wtf why should he sign something like that, he gets stronger with everything he does, and he signs a contact with a demon that could have outright enslaved him.

  • Sordahon
    Sordahona year ago
    Posted

    Wow just wow. I have to say this is one of the best Novels I have ever seen. Thanks for the great stroy Autor. We'll yes at the start the MC clearly has a really big plot armor but later it feels like the MC even has bad luck what is really rare in novels. Even the character growth is really good. In two years he growths from an actor to an actual boss and after that to a Monster. I also like how you can understand why he changes. So again many thanks for the awesome story.