tentalagim

You must have read a different story, everything you said was untrue of this story. Characters that were supposed to have been dead, aren't. Characters that are supposed to be weak, aren't. The entire world itself is an au that the mc wouldn't be able to predict anyway. "things his impact should have altered," is a nonsense statement. You nor he could know what should or shouldn't change specific outcomes unless you directly affect them, which he hasn't done. His crisis is entirely contrived ex nihilo.

So he's incredibly stupid. "I've change the outcome of many things, but what if the outcome of things can't be changed?" the cognitive dissonance is astonishing. "This coin is flipped was supposed to land on heads but I made it land on tails, but now (because I'm stupid) I'm going to say it actually did land on heads. Even though I can clearly see that it is on tails..."

Britain is tiny... It's smaller than Michigan ...

need to stop using find and replace so haphazardly. Hagrid. you replaced grid with snape.

lol, you replaced the word mage in rummage with wizard.

I believe 13 is a she?

The sword that only works because stupid people always think, "it can't possibly work against MY ultra powerful defense," and then it does because that's all it does? "Who could have ever anticipated this!?" every shinobi ever killed by it thought; stupidly.

Prologue is unnecessarily brutal and sad, but even 48 chapters in MC is still a small child with abilities that would already allow him to rule even the USA but he's still developing more Nen and Chakra and Haki next he'll unlock a Stand or Hamon from Jojo. There's been no development in the story yet and any kind of plot has yet to reveal itself.

Absolute slop. each chapter could be less than a paragraph long and convey the information better in every way. Seems to be generative text, Isn't set in Twilight at all. Immortal witches and runic magic and oc's galore.

Last chapter clearly stated that she wasn't wearing her suit.