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Daoisty3LPVR9dPostedHonestly, good concept and good story. But in my opinion, it is too unbearable to write at the end of each line who is speaking. It completely breaks the immersion. I tried to put up with it, but it makes me cranky every time I read it. I understand that it may be difficult for the author to make it clear who is speaking, but this is lazy writing, and it was certainly not a good solution for me. Furthermore, if I did not know who was speaking, I would find out only at the end of the line. How could immersion be good then? But seeing as how few people mention it, maybe it's just me. It's sad to stop reading a good story because of things like that, although it's not perfect, I quite like the concept, and I've always liked this genre, but well... Good luck to the author!
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"That glowing rock is what's called a Psionic Rune." - Daoisty3LPVR9mthReplied to Pepinillo
el traductor de google es eterno jajajaja, yo entiendo bastante leyendo, pero todavía me falta mucho en listening y vocabulario, además de que dudo al escribir ciertas cosas
'Get your act together! You knew that this was bound to happen the moment you found out about his identity! If you wouldn't have killed him, Fenrir would have ended you eventually!' Michael mentally chided himself. - Daoisty3LPVR10mthCommented
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xD
"Watch your tone Corey. Although I value you as a very close friend, that does not mean you can demean my boyfriend like that. If you were my boyfriend also, I'll not allow anybody to speak about you like that." - Daoisty3LPVR11mthCommented
hahaha, she is a good and stupid girl
"Also, Luke came back to me and apologized for everything he had done to him. I didn't want to accept him back at first, but he promised he wouldn't do all that he did to me again and I still love him so I accepted him back and now we're dating again. - Daoisty3LPVR11mthCommented
She is a good girl
"I… I'm sorry Corey but nothing can be between us. I don't love you, I just see you as a friend, a very close friend. I'm sorry but just let us be friends." - Daoisty3LPVR11mthCommented
both
"Breast or Ass?" - Daoisty3LPVR11mthCommented
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Wisdom: ???/??? - Daoisty3LPVR11mthCommented
Látom
Látom." - Daoisty3LPVR1yrReplied to Aj234_5
Dicen que el español es de los idiomas más difíciles de aprender. Por suerte es mi lengua materna jajajaja
In his previous life, Li Chengqian had no aptitude for English to begin with, and his English results were especially poor. Otherwise, there wouldn't have been a situation where he scored 28 marks. - Daoisty3LPVR1yrReplied to MHA_Gaines
- Daoisty3LPVR1yrCommented
you and your father killed him
Her brother, as she knew him, was dead. That gentle and kind Lucas was dead, and all that remained was his shell. - Daoisty3LPVR1yrCommented
?? exp*2*2*2 = exp*8
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no please
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granddaughter? really?
[Incest Seed: Impregnated your mom, sister or daughter, or granddaughter without worrying about genetic defects.] - Daoisty3LPVR1yrCommented
god tier
[Lazy System: If you want to be lazy, but can't because of your work, family, and heavy responsibility, then buy the Lazy System, this System helps you, so you can laze around without caring about anything in the world.] - Daoisty3LPVR1yrCommented
Author: 4000*6500 = 227.050.000 Me: 4000*6500 = 26.000.000 Author:227.000.000 Me: But... Author:227.050.000
She took Rudra 's account details and a transaction for 227 million 50 thousand dollars was completed , She probed Rudra about how he acquired such wealth and about future prospects of the game... - Daoisty3LPVR1yrReplied to Degenerate_Panda
his base stat probably is 0.x, not zero
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