Incarnate_1

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can you find the dxd rise to power original work I had 0 idea it was stolen until I figured out the author was banned so I did some digging as to why and now that I know I want to support the actual author with stones and such

the hell happed to the author

forcing character growth doesnt work he has no good reasons for this to happen you have not dropped hints or written in moments that would lead to this hes not bottling things up nor does he have a inner demon this is just bad writing I suggest you rework the story to make this fit

that aint no support ship thats a federal corvette

I hate to be that guy but this design is just better then author san's

love it more chapters please ill drop some stones

actually the professer had to put a mental lock on her powers because she was unwillingly soaking in all the thoughts and emotions of those around her this is what later led to the dark pheonix