Hanabi, Ino, Konan(same age as MC, I mean this is AU right?)

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Author-san i hope you get well soon

Author-san, he has a fantastic devil fruit (space space fruit) it's potential and versatility is immense. Won't he look more cool if he can perform (ope ope no mi) Water D. Law abilities. Just imagine him saying 'shambels'. And much more. I'm getting excited just thinking about it.

this is good too

arigatou Author san

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wow, I have waited so long. and finally. Arigatou Author-san

wow, that was good!

Now that's my lovely Author

wow, that was surprising. Will he still be the emo guy. What happened to Naruto and Sasuke rivalry. but the chapter is good though

That was a good chapter Author-ssn. 🤩

Yes

Thank you Author-san

I'm excited

I'm so excited.

Author-san, you are so good at this. This fanfic should be at the top of the ranking. please don't abandon it. I'm already so into it. I check every hour of the day for any updates. (Waku Waku)

Honestly it seems a pretty good FanFic, but the name's are weird. it's pretty confusing. Instead of Choji it's a funny name. For Draceul Mihawk it's Joe Rachel Mihawk. But the book is good if you understand it.