rokas_2

please update 😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

this is gonna be a masterpiece if the author continues with this great quality of writting, holy shit, more updates please 🙏. This is definetely gonna hit top 50 if author updates and keeps quality

kinda interesting, alot of flaws but readable......................kinda interesting, alot of flaws but readable......................kinda interesting, alot of flaws but readable......................

garbage and pathetic mc, absolutely disgusting trash.

good idea, trashest execution ever. The pacing is okay, the plot is all over the place, it feelsclike a fever dream while reading this, sigh.... sigh..........

sarah is a genius" was repeated several times, but not shown, statements alone dont give character depth, in her case it makes her even less mysterious or special as a character

interesting, interesting, interesting🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😗😚😗😚😚😗😚😆😚😆😚😆😚🥰😄🥰😃🥰😃😃🥰😃☺️👽☺️👽☺️♥️☺️♥️♥️🤣👽☺️♥️☺️♥️☺️👽☺️♥️

2 completely different power systems in one, this is getting completely messy already...

this is most likely ai generated novel, the story is just disgusting, like its so messy and ridicilous, in a not fun bad way, its just bad, absolutely bad as if ai generated this...

gosh, author is truly...