Of course as the author I have to Raye my work. Criticism is all welcomed from you all and when you see somewhere that I did not do well in, for example , certain elements in the story that are not well depicted . This is my first serious book I am working on, so a lot of dedication and suggestions from you readers are welcome to shape this novel

Alright. This novel where has reached so far it's shwaaeeey.my concern is on the updating part. Author, the suspense is killing.