I mean see I like to see the main character in the story doing his things well she it's okay to see some people what they're doing but you did really good but I hope you can fix this cuz most of the books I can read show the main character what they're doing so I hope you can think about this and make this book good

it's a really good but I like to see what the main characters doing all that stuff and yet oh you sure is the mother and another mother and more people can only choose one it's okay to do a couple of times just so what is doing behind the background please take this to heart and thank you and think about this

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just reading the comments I don't like it one bit raping really not a big fan of rape never will rape is the worst thing in the world right now and now this person is more f***** up than he ever is but the question right now does the main character get her f****** payback that will be fun to read I like the main character to torture to these people in the worst way possible maybe sliced their dicks up just in fun of it well that's all I need to say I'll put this on my list for now but I won't read it until I get some of your comments about this please and thank you

I was starting to like it got more in interest where I go into it but then I hit this part does the main character get her body back or what but bro that's really f***** up though but some f****** evil being took your f****** body so I don't waste my coins on this piece of junk any longer until I get my questions answer all I want to know is does the main character get her body back from this evil being that's the question