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thanks so much , after reading this comment I feel like I have the power to finish writing the novel in one hour 💪 .... ok it's just feeling 😂 , but really thanks for your encouragement

Oh bro, do you mean by spiritual art what is called world spiritual? It's very annoying to think about the corresponding level for each level in this world, especially since the cultivation levels in that novel are very many Also, the interesting thing about this art is the ability to summon from the seven worlds. It will make me bring new characters to this world, and I am a bit resistant to this matter... You know, when I read a fanfic about a novel I like, I feel disgusted by the appearance of external characters other than the MC, even if he is the one who summoned them As for weapons and pills... well I don't intend to add pills... I feel like this is a bit disgusting, farming itself is very easy with the talent that MC has, why would I make him go crazy and run to form pills and still feel in my heart that his farming is polluted by those pills and then make him go through many purification processes to rest As for weapons I have more than two ideas so don't worry, I just don't want to spoil the story for you Right now I'm really thinking about whether I should find a way from another world to increase the soul power to strengthen the word soul power or make it become stronger naturally with the bloodline? ... But after you mentioned the martial spirit, you gave me another idea and another way to strengthen the soul.

the "Spiritual Energy" itself is the fifth element or I to be more accurate it's the "soul" or "spirit" element, but thanks I'd change it

First of all, thanks for the comment Well you have some good ideas, originally I didn't intend to travel to another world but after thinking a little bit I don't feel it's too unacceptable, I just need to choose a suitable world and not prolong that world... maybe two chapters for each world, but I'm still not sure so I'll think carefully about it As for the skills from tensura, they're actually a bit attractive but I only remember "Great Sage" and its evolution "Raphael" and both are very OP so if you know where to find the skills from tensura please say and I'll look into them carefully As for the type of profound veins part, I'm not really thinking about it, the Nidhogg bloodline and many other bonuses will improve his type of profound veins and make them not inferior to any others, and there are bonuses from other worlds that are similar to the profound veins and are more fun to write but I'm afraid they'll ruin the balance of power because they're so cool As for the martial soul.... First of all, let me clarify that the things from Douluo are definitely impossible Working with us, the cultivation method in that world is extremely disgusting, I might be thinking of something like the dragon soul that Yun Che possesses, but the hero will cultivate it himself and I know the appropriate world for this, so it's not a bad idea As for the creature legacy crystal, I don't think it's too important since Nidhogg's bloodline is enough and there are many inheritances in the Primal Chaos, some of which Yun Che has obtained and some of which he hasn't, so I don't intend to do something like that.. But who knows the future alchemy? It's interesting that I already have this idea, but it's not the usual alchemy, but in that world, it's a very different alchemy than usual blacksmithing? Not interesting in itself, but coincidentally it has some overlap with the alchemy I'm thinking of The runes look very interesting but I don't know the details of any runes in any world except "Type Moon" here I mean "Fate" series and "Beginning after End" and I don't know the details in both worlds since I stopped reading "Beginning after End" a while ago Finally I'll also think about the small world, or honestly I'm more interested in the "different plants and beasts from different worlds" itself

Thanks for the review And no this is a new fan fiction novel, as you can see it's been a year already and looking back now I feel like that novel was a bit naive and I feel embarrassed just looking at it

who is rex lapis ?

who is menamya ? nangong nayo is a witch in strike the blood

thanks 🥰

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Hmm, first I would like to thank you very much for your review, no need to apologize after all your opinion is very constructive for someone as inexperienced as me, I would even like to thank you man Well let's put it aside, to tell the truth, I also understand the anarchism of the book, but well please understand that I am writing this book because I can't find any book remotely about Primal Chaos to suit my tastes and even books that are barely intolerable in quality in which I find a lot of things unacceptable to me. That's why I wrote this book I no longer have a plan and this is the cause of the chaos where I intend something and then change my mind a lot, and it also happens that I forget what I intended to do or even the purpose of doing it... Basically, this book is a reader's book, not a writer's book. Hmm, I hope you understand what I mean Finally, the wisdom of Agios basically means knowledge or intelligence. I do not mean intelligence to act or something like that. What I mean is only scientific, kinetic and combative intelligence. In any case, your comment is useful, and I will take it into account in my next work, God willing Then thanks and have a nice day