HexOath

Good story-telling, it's easy to follow and understand. Got no complaints about the Writing Quality, well done! Maybe build up a bit more suspense before the dramatic scene, but god, I love the "comedy" in it. That might just be me though. Great job so far!

Hmm, okay, so how's he going to get healed? Solan gonna heal him up or is he going to absorb the angels energy (Like a healthpack ig) Liking the story and the writing so far!

I like it so far! Keeping it a bit mysterious! Looking forward to see on how this continues!