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Moarr

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2022-05-22 JoinedEuropean Union
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  • Moarr
    Moarr16d
    Commented

    No, you need 40 points. You had 3860 points BEFORE you killed 2 bone race soldiers (each worth 50sp)

    'I need 140 points, they're perfect,' he thought.
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    Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
    Fantasy · RealmWeaver
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  • Moarr
    Moarr2mth
    Replied to JPNovelFan

    Isn't the understanding just realization whose feelings are these?

    Anger, duty, and fear filled the entirety of Khan's being while understanding dawned upon him. He knew those feelings didn't belong to him. They were a foreign presence inherited by the Nak's mana. They were the same sensations he experienced in the nightmares, just far more intense.
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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • Moarr
    Moarr4mth
    Commented

    I think they were considered bad because they kidnapped innocent people and experimented on the living. Researching dead bodies of those who tried to kill you doesn't sound that unjust

    It was even more so in anime when I read about characters like Danzo, Orochimaru and Kabuto experimenting with them. However, I unknowingly spent the last few days studying a head that I cut off and a dead body I have been storing for over 3 years! When did I become like this?'
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Moarr
    Moarr4mth
    Commented

    It's how I found the novel. It counts as advertising, I guess 🤷‍♂️ At least as long as they don't delete your Patreon link

    [A/N: I was just checking online and noticed that this fanfic has been copy-pasted on several other sites (and a few youtube channels), without any permission been taken from me. Some (like lightnovelworld and novels-online) have even created ids with the same username, display pic as mine. Kinda lost for words.
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Moarr
    Moarr5mth
    Replied to EchucaBen

    It's not how I see red

    The sweeper had pale white skin and blood red eyes that were many shades deeper than Asiva's beautiful crimson. 
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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  • Moarr
    Moarr5mth
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    The only two events I deem necessary for the plot are 1. Naruto befriends Sasuke. 2. Akatsuki starts war after Naruto & Sasuke grow up. Fujin doesn't need to stick to the original story in anything else and can change everything freely as long as he ensures these 2 events happen. Unfortunately, teaching Naruto properly destroys everything. Not only Naruto isn't mentally ready to be so strong, but it would alienate him even further, preventing him from making friends. It could also force Akatsuki's hand. I'd prefer hearing a justification like that, instead of mindlessly forcing canon.

    [A/N: It's so damn tempting to take Naruto as a proper student and train him to make him insanely overpowered, especially considering how easy that is. Unfortunately, that will go against Fujin's plans and making him do something that will be detrimental to his plans would go against his character. That will make him inconsistent. So, I can't do much here. I'll definitely explore this path in my next fanfic though.]
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Moarr
    Moarr5mth
    Commented

    He was impressed when Uchihas prepared a battlefield with seals. If he could create a favorable battlefield with imprints mid-fight, it would be a game-changer. Especially the seals preventing earth wall jutsu would make him a killing machine. On the topic of earth walls, he wanted to use them with his feet. Though the original idea is infeasible, he can imprint barriers on his feet and use them the same way

    And, in almost all cases, I can just inscribe those seals on my clothes and activate them when needed. There isn't much reason to create imprints. So, what do I do…'
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Moarr
    Moarr5mth
    Commented

    Does he even know any other fuinjutsu grandmaster?

    Hiruzen said, "Alright. I can help you with that. But, I have a question as well. Did you ask anyone else to help you?"
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Moarr
    Moarr6mth
    Replied to Moarr

    I know it's over 300 chapters late but I had to say it nonetheless

    See he just has one chance at life. And he has no interest in depending upon luck or hoping some plot supports him to avoid their radar or to get him out of trouble once he has been noticed. I don't plan on making MC behave like a moron just to get himself in trouble and then giving him insane luck or power boost to get him out of trouble. (PS : He may fall in trouble later on, but it'll be due to circumstances out of his control and not due to stupidity)
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Moarr
    Moarr6mth
    Commented

    It doesn't take any effort at all to forcefully conscript a nameless orphan. They are talented? Great! They are not? There are many places in need of cannon fodder or a lab rat. What Fujin is doing isn't being cautious. It's making himself a target. The actual cautious thing to do is to become famous and gain Hiruzen's protection - to become a light of the village instead of a darkness

    See he just has one chance at life. And he has no interest in depending upon luck or hoping some plot supports him to avoid their radar or to get him out of trouble once he has been noticed. I don't plan on making MC behave like a moron just to get himself in trouble and then giving him insane luck or power boost to get him out of trouble. (PS : He may fall in trouble later on, but it'll be due to circumstances out of his control and not due to stupidity)
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Moarr
    Moarr8mth
    Commented

    The most recent Daichi's stats I found are from chapter 236. If you want to compare them with excel sheet's content, take a look. Level: 61, HP: 50040, CP: 105744, Strength: 333

    Ch 255 Chapter 255 - The Prankster of the Leaf
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    The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
    Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
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  • Moarr
    Moarr9mth
    Replied to The_Envious_One

    Well, Gero was killed by his own creation

    Ignoring his jape, Tekku introduced himself, "I am Tekku. My likes are Science, Engineering, Research, Fuinjutsu, my Puppets, and Ramen, I would say." Remembering his pleasant visit to Ichiraku's with Iruka, he visited the Ramen Stand regularly afterward, "I dislike traitors, People interrupting my Research," looking at Ryota with a feeling, "unethical Experiments," of course, Experimenting on one's Enemies wasn't unethical and completely legitimate in such a World. There were no Human Rights. "My dream is… I am not sure; for now, becoming strong enough to protect myself and the people important to me. As for Hobbies, well, I would say Research, studying Fuinjutsu, and working on my Puppets. This is quite relaxing for me." Tekku finished thoughtfully as he realized he didn't have any hobbies just for fun. To be honest, he always was a workaholic; you don't become a Genius just through talent. A genius is a person who combines high talent with hard work, no matter in which area of life.
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    Naruto: Superior Shinobi
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  • Moarr
    Moarr9mth
    Replied to Bagoury

    There was a cannon on the ship capable of killing a jonin and in near future there will one capable of destroying a moon (so it must be already in development and/or there may be lesser versions of it but still capable of mass destruction). Whether it's firing chakra or explosives is beside the point. It's technology, not jutsu. To be honest, stating the obvious isn't much of a problem. It's salvagable/passable. Probably I wouldn't even mention it if I weren't peeved that prince has higher level than Guy, when it's his side-job at most. Some sheltered kid is stronger than war tempered taijutsu genius who is obsessed with training. I can accept I can be wrong about technology but no one will convince me Guy isn't wronged in this chapter

    The Daimyo in this story, his children, the ministers, they are all original characters I created. So now that you know a little bit more about the 3rd prince, what are your thoughts?
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    The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
    Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
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  • Moarr
    Moarr9mth
    Replied to Bagoury

    Guns may be ineffective but powerful missiles can still level a village even if they miss ninjas. Technology tends to simplify processes that otherwise require highly skilled specialists. In this case, whether it is kage-level destructive power or tokubetsu jonin expertise, with technology even genin can achieve such effects. It's unbelievable they wouldn't see prospects of technology when they already experienced its wonders. I deem the conversation in this chapter as unnecessary but it's only my first impression. Who knows how deep this conversation will go - Time will tell and it may change my mind ;)

    The Daimyo in this story, his children, the ministers, they are all original characters I created. So now that you know a little bit more about the 3rd prince, what are your thoughts?
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    The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
    Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
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  • Moarr
    Moarr9mth
    Replied to Bagoury

    I'm not sure if it's that novel when they already have computers and advanced artillery. Wars drive technological advancement. We've seen it in our world wars and they had three of them. You don't have to be a genius to see how technology's importance raises in successive wars As is, this meeting seems redundant to the story, but maybe it's just a conversation opener. We'll see in the next chapters. Till then I will keep my hopes up

    The Daimyo in this story, his children, the ministers, they are all original characters I created. So now that you know a little bit more about the 3rd prince, what are your thoughts?
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    The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
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  • Moarr
    Moarr9mth
    Commented

    I liked the new daimyo because he added some unpredictability to the story + he didn't have the flaws of the canon one. I don't like the concept of daimyos in Naruto World, but erasing them entirely from FF seems not right, so your choice is one of the best you could take. But the appearance of a teenager who became stronger than Guy as a hobby is bothering me. And creating this whole scheming just to follow a natural course of action (technology is the future whether you do something about it or not) and talking as if it was some sort of enlightened truth when it's quite obvious - I don't think there's a need for it You are so many chapters ahead on your Patreon, so I guess nothing will change no matter what I say. Hopefully, future chapters will convince me to the prince ;)

    The Daimyo in this story, his children, the ministers, they are all original characters I created. So now that you know a little bit more about the 3rd prince, what are your thoughts?
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    The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
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  • Moarr
    Moarr9mth
    Commented

    Didn't they visit his dorm room to go to Roland's duel together?

    Ch 159 Resolved
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    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
    Fantasy · WhiteNightingale
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  • Moarr
    Moarr10mth
    Commented

    In the previous chapter Lyra's quest was to hunt lighting-element magical beast. I guess it was a mistake. I left a comment there so you can easily find it and change it to earth ;)

    The beast they killed was a Lightning-type beast. It wouldn't finish their quest, so they would have to keep hunting. But they still got their hands on a core that they could use to finish a mission later. They would just take a Lightning Magical Beast hunting mission and submit the Beast Core. That was generally what Marcus did for his Mercenary Quests.
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    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
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  • Moarr
    Moarr10mth
    Commented

    You changed it later to earth element

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    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
    Fantasy · WhiteNightingale
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  • Moarr
    Moarr10mth
    Replied to SAM_NZ_1127

    You need to focus more while reading. This paragraph is about Marcus ;)

    Now that he had access to these pills, he was planning on breaking through to the 2nd Circle by the end of the month. If he could do that before he reached the academy, then he could easily maintain his rank in the New Student Rankings.
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    I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy
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