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Mana cores. Reminds me of Tbate, but i also wonder how the ranking system is going to work for mana cores is it like deepwoken with star mantras so level 1 mana core can use 1 star mantras?
so the gods of man made things like order, peace, evil, laws, etc are conceptuals and the gods of fire, life, death, water, etc are not?
mana gates? the 2 things i think of when thinking of mana gates is the whirlpool or uber dsk tp they can do
wait thats the god that got its powers taken from the prince of cures in the rogue lore right? i wonder if the prince is gonna be a thing.
sendo is gonna work my guy to the bones
so skills activate involuntarily? or do you use them by thinking about it
Oh? so people have natural attunements that match them? i wonder how lifeweaver and the sort is going to work? also wonder if other attunments not in the game/lore are going to be added (space, time, gravity, etc)
reminds me of ORV a bit
This chapter was great. in my opinion better then the last 2, but one thing i have to say is if you could describe what the people look like more. would be a lot better for imagining what they look like also if your gonna add malk add unnamed or something would be funny.
I like it so far. Great World background (because it based off of Deep/Rogue so i already know a lot). Updates seem good so far but i wouldnt know because its only been 2 chapters. Writing Quality is great, but i gave it 4/5 because its not perfect. Story Development is a bit fast but good so far. I had to give Character Design a 3/5 because there isnt much known about what he looks like besides the hair and that he might be a Azeal because he's Roy haru.
Okay so Roy haru? the D-Sage Azeal. Doing the Trial of Solans. His backstory is very unsettling to say the least. At most he Lived? Im thinking hes fine because killing a monster would give a healthpack. You wouldnt really call it a healthpack but it could be absorbing the Extra mana to heal yourself thats my guess.
Lannis?
Okay so he's not a rigan. Because Solan was racist to them :Skull:
ROY HARU? Wait so is he a Rigan? Before he becomes azeal? Also Looking at the stats i see "Divinity" Guessing thats the god he is chosen by?