Kazys_Dylys

to spare.

Everyone keeps forgetting the she can just leave a portion of Renata in they ship to supervise what they do in secret. If they try to betray her Renata can just take over the ship and deliver them to her. All problems sorted.

We'll obviously not getting stuck in your research does her well.

Harming him??? Think you need to get someone to do a foolproof reading before posting as too many mistakes recently.

Yeah. He keeps mixing names from both his novels.

So I guess you dropping this in the end?

Shadow magic would be cool

I think it's going great . The pacing feels natural and well thought. So in all , keep going. You doing very well .

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I have to say that am enjoying this story much more than your last one. It feels more polished, more thought out and interesting to read. I hope you will not rush it and will deliver a great story. So keep going there will be people who enjoy it