Nag_4596

there are taboos as well. those that get lightning tribulations at every major breakthrough, and I saw a few novels where there is such. tbh, their tribulations are their base cultivation +2 major realms like qi condensation and the tribulations is for core formation, etc. it's nice cus some receive enlightenment making their already perfect cultivation more sublimated. like from 2 realms stronger to 3, till whenever you want. and no, he didn't debuff the mc because that's what a good author does. remain to the cause of letting the mc remain op. otherwise, he won't make it op from the start like others do, unfortunately.

again, too much. you either fuck a women there that would be saved or it's plain idiotic. he has the means to become op real fast, no need for "for some reason I want to be a bitch of a ferryman". lmao

nah, that's stupid. you either focus on mc or just fuck around till it remain a ghost novel, tbh. Just say that he reincarnated with a few bitches and want to get his things back. big deal. "for some reason" x3 like it's something emotional. no, it's not, just plain boring and annoying. it's a fillar that you can skip, and I, for one, would do that.

I still don't understand why authors aren't making their mc selfish to the extreme. that's human basic, and it'll just make a stupid mc. I doubt you'll remember what you did 30 mins ago, let alone rules from earth that 90%+ of the population don't know. even other countries have different rules like 14+ years age of consent or even less. let's not mention war times with 10-12 or even behind the scenes where rich people fuck whoever wants with zero fucks given and gets scrot free

mysterious, like a forced guardianship, etc. fate have it that authors like to fuck around and find why nobody read their novels oof

I accept that I begin to hate this novel, so imma quit soon ngl.

wtf is this forced shit? at least explain, wtf

well, too much drama, too many fights, no romance, no nothing, extremely boring and a waste of time tbh. they need even 1k chapters to be almost cuckold and even then, it could have happened if maybe the author didn't have mood swings. you risk, I quit. keke

I really hate this word when it's shouting time

you did something similar with the portal and space-time something something. you can totally make it yourself based on her quirk. it's just time attribute and can improve his quirk by analyzing hers and for space with that of kuragiri and some random dude in Bahamas like "I found this dude here" and shit. you literally shit on the flow of the novel 90°. even you yourself wrote that he couldn't do much with his harem around eri, etc. already a burden and way to exaggerated emotions for a kid when the last part of his fucking in a hotel he said "if someone sees us, then they would be dead" or something. so don't go fucking around that she's 6 and innocent and that cus it's bullshit. first, you got into details unnecessary at the beginning of the novel till mid+ and even now you're still doing it but not that worse and now you got her like it's a curse. it's getting down real fast, and I'm trying not to drop it cus you got the mind for it, and I really don't want to read just a few paragraphs and skip the rest just for the sake of it.