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🇧🇷 This chapter seems shorter than the previous one. And where is the confrontation? Shouldn't that be the title of the chapter? Where is the fight? Where is the blood? Where is the confrontation? No offense, but all that time not writing has left you rusty, author. The chapter's sparse word count, shallow conversations, superficial descriptions, and numerous grammatical errors left much to be desired in this chapter. Don't be in a hurry to post the story. Just take your time to improve everything you can until you're happy with what you have. No one likes a rushed story. 🇧🇷
🇧🇷 I agree with my friend's opinion. In a fictional world, energy shields are not an option, they are a necessity and an absolute requirement. Unfortunately the advancement of technology in the Star Wars world is very confusing and scrambled. On the one hand they have hyperspace travel, but on the other they don't have airships with aerodynamic design, or almost nothing. It seems that a lot of basic technology ended up being lost and forgotten in history, this meant that various types of devices and their more advanced versions, which could be very useful, ended up never even being designed, much less created. It even seems that the discovery and development of very advanced technologies occurred very early, causing the foundations not to have been reinforced, lacking diversity, this meant that several fields of engineering have been neglected. I'm not saying that the technology and engineering in Star Wars is bad, just weird and with a lot of glaring inconsistencies. I will also post a sci-fi image to support the cause. 🇧🇷