BoredObserver

Im impreset by this book it have potential to become one of peak novels on this site

I love background of this book Idea of MC being summoner with human's is innovative jet simple but why everyone hate him ? why everyone hate him ? I know that his human summons made people fear him but its too much for me it's like everyone in the world hate him for his talent. even if he win fight with "king" of the school it didn't make difference it's like everyone in the word lose all intelligence and focus on "destroying" pride of MC , I don't mean it in wrong way it's entertaining but it feels forceful and unnecessary. school is nothing but breathing ground for bullies and nothing else I'm in chapter 100 so maybe later things will change but for now it's feels like books focusing on bulling and every adult who looks at it pretend that they didn't see anything it's frustrating . every positive response is by promise to give something precious like heart of MC mother first summon . apart from that it's graeat book flights are fun to read , every power are little bit different and unique , well this book has now more then 400 chapters so I hope my criticism was only retroactive

its good book but ... it's feels fragmented ? some parts are simply missing for example tribe walk for 14 days across scorching sand then find place with water . that was perfect but later we find that few hours across this location is entarie forest as if desert that run across entire planet end in one moment. there are some minor inconsistencies that make this novel ... weird . there wasn't supposed to be god in this planet but leater we find there are at least 2 gods . it feels like someone forgot part of the plot or simply glue different stories . its not bad but ... its confusing to read especially when someone want to imagine this world.

keep it up author it's perfect novel to read :) tfc !

that some minor neat changes, I have great expectations from your book on kindle best of luck author !

this story has potential but the author butcher it . for the first 100 chapters it's a good read about the army and the war with a mix of sci fi giving little bit of Warhammer arc . then it becomes cultivation novel the same as 1000 others . evidently author didn't have Idea what to do next so he copy other ideas and smashed it together . fighting with big scary bos for 30 chapter ? at the end military bombarded base and destroyed everyone ... wtf ? AHH also of course there are 4 evil beings and one of them is slaanesh XD lack of creativity and ideas what this novel should do is scary . but hey it's webnovel so I can't give 2 stars

The concept is good but it's simply boring . Word is consistent but MC didn't have any grand goals, mystery simply doesn't exist , for what it's worth this is the story of a guy who has different dungeons in his house that's it . Concept of incorporating modern weapons is great buy why do I need to read 5 chapters about buying arrows ?

I fell in love with this novel . my only regret is that the author didn't produce more chapters . I literally found this book yesterday and read all available chapters in one day. If you are a fan of Warhammer you will like it

i love sci FI especially when MC is a mechanic and builds his own empire from scratch but the problem is that it's not interesting iIdon't even mean that plot is weird but simply the author writes in an not interesting way. I don't know what I can tell more I read 200 chapters trying to find why I like this book and don't like It at the same time. and I find this book has interesting concept fine heros but it's simply boring

I love it this book . its interesting protagonist is cute and innocent even though he murder everyone . author definitly refresh dungeon concept it's not perfect but I'm glad I find this gem