Theothegiant
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A great start to an amazing romance, the descriptions are on point and the narration is authentic, you can feel the frustrations she had with her assigned lover and desire to escape it all, the first chapter leaves many questions that would make anyone want to read more! What happened between her and her ex best friend now fiance, what was the job she was assigned etc etc. This is a new and completely unique novel in the genre and Im excited to see where it leads
NEW CHALLENGER APPROACHING!! We're back- thanks for those who stayed but as i said this aint dropped and it wont be! To celebrate coming this far into the book im going send a non ai generated image of any characters in the series and yes it will be their cannon look, just comment what characters you want to see!
if he tried to hard to avoid that one what do you think he did with the rest?
everything i do is on purpose- this not a stupid mistake or anything im tired of hearing this now you know nothing of the story im trying to write and you only read one chapter why are you assuming this is a stupid mistake? just keep reading bro- or you rlly gonna let this ruin the book for you
well thats sad ig if you want to complain about it you could drop it now but i do have a reason for this that isnt revealed until later so you could either read or leave it doesnt matter to me
if you keep reading you will understand
great structure, great story over all, i like the way you did emotions with rain and i understand that this book may have been edited here and there. but im just gonna go off what I read I sense a deep lore as deep as you oceans this story resided in! Imagine this is me reviewing the unedited ver of the chapters imagine how could it is now! Keep going Nocturn! You got this
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