Interesting and well written , the plot is perfectly explained in minimum words while keeping reading interesting ! well done ! let's continue reading 😁

Keep Going author ! The cover attracted me and the plot made me stay . The grammer is great and I dint feel difficulty while reading while the plot is intresting !

__________________________________________________________________awesome novel , must read __________________________________________________________________

like should i edit chapter 1 and add more mistakes made by alex ?

can you elaborate ?

Gareth

Nice chapter Great conversation between characters Nice plot Has huge potential, keep going 💪

elysian0749

i have send the request

you wrote by for the system , means you are upgrading the system , I think it should be buy from the system as in system shop

As an author who has just started writing, I can say that you have done a commendable job As for the review of the book, I see that you are editing all your flaws in the chapter making the novel already better Going toward the plot, it is interesting also the anti-hero element is given is also given justice I look forward to the future of this novel .

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sure

The fight of level 10 Alex 🥶

our brave warrior , rip [img=Unalived]

goblins ready to pounce [img=In your face]

The first enemy / kill

Alex appearing on planet gaia for first time

The Guide