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Cumking

Cumking

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2022-05-16 JoinedAscension Island
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  • Cumking
    Cumkinga year ago
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

  • Cumking
    Cumkinga year ago
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    I think the characters are great, but the plot still feels shallow and unclear, so it’s hard to tell where the story is headed. The action scenes are good and detailed, though. Maybe try to develop the plot direction further. I hope you keep updating and don’t drop this story.

  • Cumking
    Cumkinga year ago
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    This book has been deleted.
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    Cumkinga year ago
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    This book has been deleted.