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Dont read my comment as it is speculation about the fanfic, unless you are ok with potential spoilers. I am ok with the hatred ending as long as both the kages and the involved personel from the first uzumaki attack die in this war. It would be hypocritical for shanks and the uzumaki to completely purge the two villages, as they would essentially be making another place suffer what they did, not setting a good example for his people. Also hoping to see manga haki powers come up, like how haki disrupts hydrafication aka regen(that might have already been shown but seeing it again in this pivotal war would be sick) and seeing haki destory the third raikage's lightning armor and hell stab will be peak. I am curious about if Black Zetsu will interfere.
Having Modulo Yuji in FGO is an awesome idea. I need to see Yuji willingly pull off Black Flash Chains on Goetia, the Grailed Servants like Artoria, Tiamat, etc, and the Lostbelt Bosses. Please let this continue. Cannot wait for more of this and other awesome stories.
I think either I wrote this for a different Uchiha fanfic or I meant something else. Like with the itachi thing, itachi is not dumb anymore, he is a normal kid, also mikoto is with the mc so fugaku is not the Father who messes up. My bad about the mixup, and thanks for pointing it out.
Yo this ain't a dbz story, please bring us back to the right universe and timeline. Also we need more bonding, aka fluff, between the mc and Yamato, so we can appreciate the bond beyond the freedom and passion stuff. Great story so far tho.
We have the start of the mc's yonko crew, and now the true war begins. Sadly kamui will probably be exposed and his advanced conquerer's haki too...but we will have our reckoning from this au sengoku, tsuru will definitely tell the truth if she survives, and aokiji will defect and prolly join the mc cause the world government will have akainu become fleet admiral.
Monster hunter being a great monster franchise combined with One Piece's wacky creatures makes a great cross over. The MC starts with a good form, and runs into great characters to hook readers. Overall a great one piece story to try!
The most interesting turn of events. Pluton has been found but needs a power source, like Uranus which is with the world government, then the encounter with the Marines and Sengoku at the Mads vessel. The fact that Sengoku used conquerer's infusion and either hybrid or Buddha form only to get equaled by our mc is excellent, especially because of sengoku and the main character's plans after the clash. though I do want to not that with only 4 shots of immortality, you can't give them to all 5 top tiers of the marines, as you listed sengoku himself, Kong(is that really valid, cause 50/50 he is OK with the gorosei) Garp(definitely worth it), Tsuru(definitely worth it), and Zephyr(worth it, but they have to make sure he doesn't lose his family, his students, and the weevil warlord situation doesn't happen). For Zephyr I think it is possible, as long as when he is alone he can manipulate the immortal Regeneration so that when he clashes with weevil he overdrafts his life force to buff his admiral tier haki, as weevil at best is yonko commander 1 level, so if Zephyr's haki gets to peak admiral level he should be able to win, especially since he will still be in his prime and in peak form when he fights weevil. Great chapters, keep the hype train going!
The main event has begun, with the final Trump Card still in reserve. Having current Luffy come first was a great move, as the world would have assumed the future luffy to be an imposter or a sick joke, though all the same they would be proven to be true prime versions of each person. The shock factor shown on the marines and pirates was great, and I can't wait to see more. Keep up the great work!
And the stars of the show have been identified. Dragon leaving right after God Valley is interesting, as I don't believe he has a devil fruit to fly away yet, so he'll need to be careful. Kaito going to hachinosu for cremated is interesting, but we probably won't get the other 2 all stars until later. The MC is setting up Wano quite nicely, and I hope when Queen shows up they can start using the advanced tech of Pluton and Queen's mechanical science to either improve the artificial Zoans, or at minimum their ship yo become relative to Pluton. Lastly, seeing Shiki over Whitebeard's bounty is both strange and makes sense, as Whitebeard is low key compared to the Golden Lion and hypothetical third emporer during this Era according to context from the Ace novels.