I don't know how to write but i am very observant to silly mistakes so imma correct you if i find some and if your story is a disappointment not reaching my expectations I'll definitely abuse you
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To what end? He was prepared to give them his wallet without violence so this statement doesn't make sense
very very dumb decision and thinking process
No original body memories ?
change the title if you can?
Why does this sound so dumb?
He's still the weakest
You need to correct those small mistakes you made in the prologue, there's aleast 2 or sum mistakes in the first 4 sentence
The writing quality is good? WtF bro, are you a bot? instead of correcting the author about his/her writing so that he/she can improve you're lying to the author SMH
Why do you have to make him a loser and bullied ?
Friendship is overrated