NarcissisticAuthor
Meh.
of reading
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Read books
Or just friends.
Geez, that's larger than he is
-999 social credit for Jrar
Really?
Just write what you wanna write, you try and write for the readers and eventually you won't be able to write anything at all
I remember that sand thing being filler, but I'm gonna check
The hallucination of a voice in your head is also common when you are close to dying
The part of the story where he is in sudden fantastical pain in his right arm and hears a voice in his head and yet when his mother heard screaming, he ran up to him and asked once wrong, right there should be his time to demand to go to a hospital, he is right, sudden pain in your right arm is incredibly unusual, and is also one of the many signs of an incoming heart attack, him just clamming up and shutting down whatever help he could possibly get is incredibly stupid and it shows first you don't care about yourself, and second you don't trust the person asking if you need help or showing worry in anyway shape or form
Oh! I see now, its just that this is in a small sentence and further within a small single paragraph, makes this entire thing, completely forgettable and worthless
I don't see anywhere where this dude was attacked, only that she was kicked and left a burning shoe print on her stomach
When did he do that??
I have anxiety when one of my teachers even looks at my direction much less write a speech
No such thing as a rainy season in Jamaica, its only one season, and its Summer all year round