The characters in the story are great as well as the storyline. The story line followed a unique step by step process of uncovering things and I love it. I also love the way the action in the story was written. I must say the author is talented.

This storyline behind this story is something that randomly came to my mind one day and so I decided to put it into writing. I love listening to stories as well as telling one myself. That's why I put together this action packed piece of tale and delivered it to you guys. I really hope you enjoy it a d don't forget to share your thoughts on the story. Let me know if there's any area of my story that needs improvement and lastly don't forget to share. It goes a long way to support me.