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Big ui Daniel using Jake's brother moves on lil ui Daniel means nothing. Once big Daniel ramped up his strength a little bit, he demolished lil Daniel. Just because he used a different move than we've seen before doesn't mean anything. Eli gets one shotted by everyone you mentioned, he's literally a fodder. As of right now, lil Daniel is not really strong, but he's slowly getting there
Why make a mc like that if you're just gonna lower his stats? What's next? I really don't wanna be a scum or anything like that, but man it is unpleasant when authors do that
In a world like this, I really don't get how such a thing will be "hard to believe". Like, everything else can happen, but a soul entering a dead person's body is just too out of this world?
The second body already mastered all martial arts though
My man's tryna gaslight someone's gender 😭
The mc will be able to reach really high tiers, right? I tend to choose an op mc over a weak one, but since this is a ptj fanfic, I enjoy a not very powerful mc in the beginning as long as he won't be trashed around and actually gets stronger
So did Davey, right?
Wrong pronouns everywhere. She's a girl, not a guy
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You are using a little bit too much "man-eating monsters"