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vedang_agarwal8mthCommentedCh 104 Setting Sail- vedang_agarwal9mthReplied to Proginator
Man is it so wrong to accept that u wrote something that deviates from canon and u didn’t know about it rather than insulting someone
This book has been deleted. - vedang_agarwal9mthReplied to Proginator
Tell that to author of moshoku tensei who added lighting as an addition to that huge rain spell
This book has been deleted. - vedang_agarwal10mthCommented
how and when did this NEW specie come from atleast write down how when create new things
"We'll have to be careful, because we broke the world's laws by becoming a new species that the creator never created," I said with little worry evident on my face, but it began to fade away as a gentle hand took my face from either side and turned it to the side where I met the warm eyes of my partner, the eyes that became the reason for my quickened heartbeat. - vedang_agarwal10mthReplied to Ayries_Jesea
But u just said it can injure a spirit sage no with defensive skills on. Really is there no difference between 10 level and 40 level Even if he has 100 percent control so what really There would a big quality difference between the levels Even if he has better quality with his technique it should be not this great. Then I gave example of Oscar,he can provide support to a one ring person to defeat a 2 ring person under most scenario or even 3 ring person as he is support system but mc is control system fighting a combat oriented beast Please write something that minutely makes sense as till now this fanfic was the best soul land fanfic I have read Please don’t make this ur wet dream now.
"Yes, he won," Qian Daoliu informed her calmly, a smile on his face. However, internally, he was astonished. He was amazed at Cai Wen's last attack, it was potent enough to potentially harm a spirit king or spirit emperor, even with their defensive skills in place. - vedang_agarwal1yrCommented
Ouch! that stings
The escape from school, from responsibility, from... life. - vedang_agarwal1yrReplied to SpoiledSecrets
Then he will go steal the scroll of sealing for flying lighting god
I'll need a lot of time to master these. Fortunately, I do have a lot of time. Additionally, I should check all the scrolls in the B section. It would be good if I find any good jutsus. More importantly, I want to see if there are any Barrier jutsus. - vedang_agarwal1yrCommentedIf it's the latter, then it'll be a waste. But if it's the former, then it can be insanely good! If in the future I get my hands on the Raikage's Lightning chakra mode technique and combine it with Swift Release and my own speed and they all stack up, I'll easily be the fastest ninja ever. And there is no need to even think about how overpowered that speed would make me. Especially if I even add the Flying Thunder God to the mix.'
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really how dumb can one be
It was also a book on basic computing and operating system principles. In his previous life, he had read it for a month but could not remember anything. - vedang_agarwal1yrCommented
I see, no saintess in this world
Although it was relatively safer to awaken auxiliary professions, they were completely inferior to combat professions in terms of social status and wealth. - vedang_agarwal1yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
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Great Concept of the story but for any indian out there our world shown is too small like it has some part of up and only bihar.The real mauryan empire was bigger or atleast had many enemies sorrounding it.If mc's kingdom has contol of the whole continent then give more regions give more backstory and keep up the good work its really great concept and i loved it (its noble)