CrazyNoahV

I really enjoyed the beginning and middle but when he started to just be a slightly more intelligent but still completely sadistic and unworthy keelish is where I’m gonna have to take my leave. I had hoped he would become a mix of human morality and animalistic drive but it turns out even as a human he was a psychopath. But I’ll admit you make a very, very good and drawing novel. Keep it up.

MC is a huge hypocrite talking about how he hates what fate does to villains and cannon fodder but then turns around and attempts to break the mind of some of the people fate screws with the most which are heros.

Ya I’m like this is some decent primitive progress and all of a sudden there’s elves and trees of life and he creates a new one and in a single chapter basically controls the entire Elfen tribe made me completely abandon this crap

He seems really old if he’s hunch backed and silver hair at fifty my dads 60 and his hair is still mostly brown and not hunched

This would be maternal instead of paternal. I think it comes from Greek or Latin being mater and pater meaning mother and father

Thanks for the chapter

Bitch

I think this would be a good novel if I could actually read it without having to pause and comprehend what the author was trying to say. I’m guessing the authors first language isn’t English which good job I only know English but if you want a more coherent read for native English speakers try downloading grammerly.

Thanks for the chapter and which ever way you think works best for you

Thanks for the chapter