The author's writing quality is simply good. Well written story, I like both the quality of the writing and the design of the characters. World Design looks pretty decent too. The constant switching of POVs confused me a bit, but that might be a personal thing. Keep up the good work!

wroom wroom

Hello everyone, It's been a month and over 30,000 words since I released the first chapters, since we're right in front of the 50k words mark, I feel it's time to do a decent review of what I think of the novel, myself. Before I start, I would like to say a few things. At first, I started writing out of boredom, but before I knew it, I was absorbed in my own story and I started to enjoy writing for the story itself. It was both fun and pain sometimes going from work to writing, from writing to bed, and back to work, every.single.day. However, I still managed to deliver quite a lot of chapters, even though it was my first time writing. So let's see what I think about the novel so far. The first ten chapters are both good and bad. They are sophisticated but not perfectly delivered, there are grammatical errors and some chapters are boring to read. However, lately, I've been trying to go through them again and polish them as much as I can without changing any information for people who have already read them. If you survive those chapters the writing should get better with each chapter, it's still a bit messy until chapter 25 or 26 when I started to pay a lot more attention to how I write. The progress of the story is a bit slower, but from the 19th chapter, you can look forward to a series of actions. But don't worry because some of the actions are in the earlier chapters as well. I've also increased the word count in each chapter with almost every new release. Or at least compared to the first 10 chapters. With the current latest chapter, I delivered what I wanted. And we can now start a new saga. A saga of friendship and companions, rivals and enemies, and much more. Please look forward to the next chapters.

Thank you for both reviews and tips with the synopsis!

Only a few chapters read so far. The writing quality is very good, each character seems interesting and the story progresses steadily. Will definitely check it out when I have more time. Personally, too much talking between characters sometimes confused me.

Glad you like it, but we barely touched the story ;-) I wish I could write as fast as others and release 14 chapters a week, but unfortunately can't.

Verm is just old perv :)

Indeed, but on the other hand, melee weapon with magic would have limited range capability, on the other hand Bow would have more advantages in range and limited capability in close combat. It's just view of perspective, melee class can use skills to get close to the target, but so can range class use abilities to get away. All depends on skills, I wouldn't say that there is strongest or weakest weapon, each of the weapons has their own Pros and Cons .

Bow for sure is a bit disadvantageous, but only in normal scenarios, when you add magic to that, it's on another level.

trash, said who?

Hi, it depends on what kind of impact you are looking for? Getting super strong as your stats in the game increase or perhaps, the whole world jumping into VR reality? Well, you going to need to find out in the following chapters. A small hint was dropped in chapter 14, and in the following chapters, some more information will be provided.

Will fix it, thanks!

Is my English so bad? ^.^

I'm glad you like his pick ;-)

I just noticed that it was wrongly explained. It was supposed to be a "pause between VR helmet usage expanded from every second day to every third day". Thanks for noticing.

Will keep that in the mind. Thank you

Autor here: To all experienced readers, please be gentle. I hope you will enjoy the story, regardless of my writing. For now, I've released 10 chapters, while having another few as backup, but before I work on them, I would like to know your thoughts. Unfortunately, editing all of my mistakes and polishing takes me several times longer than writing. So releases might be slow, especially because I have a full-time job other than writing. But the end of whining, have fun!

finally some good IRL stuff, that's why I prefer VRMMO stuff over casual fantasy, to have the mix in between them

No other players interaction what so ever, too little of real world, if it wasn't for the system things, one would think it's purely cultivation book. I hope it will change in few following chapters, the repetitive of NPC slap MC, MC slap them back and win and get stronger is getting tiresome.