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AzuraAmasu

AzuraAmasu

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2022-05-12 JoinedGlobal
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
    Commented

    Reminds me of a certain someone...

    "I usually train my control here. I like to attack from a distance, so I use these grids to measure my accuracy. I'm going to aim for the 19th row and 13th column. Watch!" Hailey lifted an arm high into the air. A large chunk of ice began to form in front of her. It was 3 meters long and 1 meter wide. Swoosh! The ice flew up into the air. After traveling up several dozen meters, it began to fall rapidly. Boom! It slammed into the ground. "Damn! So close! I was only off by one column!"
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    Steampunk Apocalypse!
    Horror · SnoozySloth
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
    Posted

    The story has really peaked my interest, I love the words of choice it's really immersive. The only takeaway I have is the paragraph being one big summary, rather than small sections but other than that I really hope you keep updating.

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    My Rebirth into a NobleWoman Despite My Good Life.
    Fantasy · ChloeThorne
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
    Commented
    Suddenly, his father went silent. Ed glanced at his father's hands and saw that they were trembling, but they kept moving the levers to keep them walking forward. After a few minutes, he managed to speak again, "It was a nightmare, Ed. I had only ever heard about them. It was so much worse in person. It was taller than the city walls and was covered in flames. Before it even got near us, it scooped up a big chunk of earth and threw it at the city. It was like a meteor shower raining hell upon us. I saw buildings collapse, soldiers crushed, and flames spread everywhere."
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    Steampunk Apocalypse!
    Horror · SnoozySloth
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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    AzuraAmasu1yr
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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    AzuraAmasu1yr
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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    AzuraAmasu1yr
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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    AzuraAmasu1yr
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
    Commented

    like this?

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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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    AzuraAmasu1yr
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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    AzuraAmasu1yr
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
    Commented
    Jake backed off slowly with sweat dripping down his back, "E… Ed where did you get that? You know it's illegal for citizens to carry arms. Have you gone crazy? Just calm down, okay? We're all friends here. It's all good."
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    Steampunk Apocalypse!
    Horror · SnoozySloth
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
    Commented

    The way your sentences are written needs a bit of work, but other than that the story seems interesting.

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    My reincarnation as a Rabbit?(ARCHIVE)
    Fantasy · Olympu
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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    AzuraAmasu1yr
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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    AzuraAmasu1yr
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
    Commented
    The first figure paled, but then Isaac pressed the trigger.
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
    Commented
    Isaac looks like his little sister, except his sister is less pretty.
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
    Commented

    creepy

    Their tiny mouths were stretched so much that it was thought to be impossible.
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • AzuraAmasu
    AzuraAmasu1yr
    Commented
    Loki grinned and nodded, ''Getting Legacy at Level 10 would break the game's balance! You must have known about it already. If you accepted, you would have died, but you rejected and cleared the dungeon, and I gave you Dexterity stat because you impressed me.''
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    Games · Alekzi
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