Xeros_Tempest
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"Wait? Why is the IAmTheStrongestReader writing anything?"- Xeros_Tempest2mthCommented
her* ---> his
Azariah feared her mother more than anything in this world. - Xeros_Tempest7mthCommentedArlott knew the castle was big from the outside, but when he entered inside and looked above, his jaw slammed on the floor.
- Xeros_Tempest8mthCommentedCh 622 It’s Finally Over . . . Or is it?
- Xeros_Tempest1yrCommented
Nah... It's better
Sorry guys, a long chapter again. - Xeros_Tempest1yrCommented
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2. How would you rate the characters? (1-5) - Xeros_Tempest1yrCommented
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1. How much would you rate the plot thus far? (1-5) - Xeros_Tempest1yrCommented
Jacob* ---> Edward
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I saw* my image
My hands were shaking and my heart was beating fast as I looked at that face I didn't know. I wondered who I was, the intangible who lay inside me. I my image in the mirror lost in the darkness that hovered in my room. That downcast, tired, disillusioned face was asking me, "Who am I?" And I didn't know the answer. I didn't know what I am or what I was looking for. I only knew that my heart was full of doubts and that I was unable to discover my identity. - Xeros_Tempest1yrCommented
Aurora* ---> Elona
"Falkrona Art," Aurora called out, raising her sword high in the air. Grey mana gathered at the tip of her blade. - Xeros_Tempest1yrCommented
some ---> woke
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please author...change his age or something this is way too rushed
I felt a little heavy in my heart when I heard those words. I could also see from the memories that the original Ethan was also very mature for his age and acted like a grown up kid instead. Maybe it was the environment that he grew up in that caused him to grow up faster. - Xeros_Tempest1yrReplied to Nezha_777
Even so....It just sounds absurd
I finally got seated and started eating my breakfast. After finishing, I was about to get up when I heard the voice of my father, "Ethan, do you want to learn the way of sword?" - Xeros_Tempest1yrCommented
Leopold* ---> Leonard
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her* ---> his
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boyfriend* ---> girlfriend
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"would have" works as a CONDITIONAL PERFECT. e.g-> if i had received the money, i would have given it to you. it's something like this i guess. well...not like i am a grammar teacher. Though, I hope it helps.
"If only those bitches would have helped us instead of abandoning us." - Xeros_Tempest1yrCommented
"would have" * ---> had
"If only those bitches would have helped us instead of abandoning us." - Xeros_Tempest1yrCommented
have*--->had
"If only I have someone to rely on." - Xeros_Tempest1yrCommented
could have* ---> had
"If only we could have known about this."