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Damm crazy 🤪 loved it. Do Author san, any thoughts on updating star wars?

Hello Author, Thank you so much for writing this story, it's absolutely amazing. Author is the star wars story abandoned?

Amazing story , well written characters, very good world building and everything is very good. But too bad this story is dead as thr Author seems to have abandoned it.

let us be fair here for once. The necrons were the masters of physics and humanity even at its height during their golden age had barely scarched the surface of what the Necrons had achieved. So basically even with all the discovery and innovation of the independence sector , humanity is not capable of fighting the Necrons head on. That said I love this story a lot but I think , it could have been even more better is there was a touch of realism added to it. Eventually this story would becomes repetitive if MC becomes to Op and easily clears all the obstacles. Because so far this is becoming the case with the story.

This story has a lot of potential but when it comes Romance it is completely gone down hill. The MC was pushed into romance with an OC too early and having romance with Cersi or Elia would have far more better for story. Unfortunately author in opinion here made a blunder. Having a Romance with Cersi or Elia would have created a better narrative for the story, where the MC grows in strength and eventually gains his girl. This would have been far more better than that rushed romance with OC. all the dynamics that could been added to win the hand of Cersei or Elia. Sadly wasted 😞 potential. But nonetheless story is good enough.

Author if you are gona use real world examples then please put some research into it. Saudi Arabia economy is very weak and there has been little to no progess, Russia's economy has been stagnant and falling ever since USSR. China economy is heavily based exports and domestic demand is almost negligible because it's people cannot afford much. only Eastern China is advanced specifically the areas near the cost and rest of the parts China are in a not so good situation. Where the western demacrocies are way too well off, people have highers pays, can afford more and let's not forget majority of technological advancements come from democratic nations. Please research a bit before giving real world examples.

Oh this is pure gold what a cahpter. Can't stop laughing

omg what a find loved this story and I am quite excited for more.

Daphne is a blonde.

Seriously people anything close to Monarchy is trouble. all those revolutions to remove monarchy from power were not done because people were bored. Monarchy is a highly inefficient system where society is ruled by few families and based on merit and skills. This is why Imperium was so messed up.