Uni_Desires

Yuna Uzumaki reference?

Helloooo! I’ve read enough of this fanfic to probably put in my 2 cents worth on it. First off the idea. The idea of the fanfiction is actually not bad and is quite unique. The main character I personally don’t like the main character. He’s not what I would call stupid, but more dimmer than most. He mostly relies on matatabi for information about the world and its inhabitants. That and his memories. The Writing I don’t really like the writing. I don’t know if anyone else is getting this feeling, but when I read it. I don’t feel anything. A blank text. There is no emotion inside the writing and it’s almost like it’s just descriptive text. I think that’s it?

Spirit transformation technique*

The technique doesn’t use oil by default. Jiraiya likely only started adding oil to his fire style techniques after he became a toad summoner.

“Why hello ther-“ “YOU DARE APPROACH ME!?!? YOU ARE COURTING DEATH!”

Meanwhile in kirigakure: “Why is the sun getting bigger…” “Why is there two suns?”

Yeah it’s absolutely wild. A lot of the fanfics cut the jutsu seals by a lot which is pretty self explanatory as to why.

Idk to be honest. A lot of stuff like that is explored by the series. Plus Naruto’s combat style in the series more leans towards group numbers and spam rasengan. And use kurama chakra modes as last resort or for high level fights. It’ll honestly be amazing if you incorporate a few amazing jutsu ideas into the work. Try to be original, or even if you’re not atleast make it interesting

Tsunade doesn’t use pure taijutsu. Her explosive strength comes mostly from her chakra control. It’s explained in anime that its chakra exiting the fists in an explosive point of impact. Her taijutsu is actually the weakest in terms of skill level compared to those 3 you listed. Might guy relies on strong fist technique, which yes doesn’t use chakra. It’s a pure stamina taijutsu style. And of course he uses 8 gates. The 4th Raikage is mostly taijutsu mixed with the lightning chakra mode. Thus creating a nin-taijutsu form of combat. (I don’t remember if the 4th raikage can use the hell stab technique like his father, the 3rd raikage can. But that would also qualify as a non-taijutsu technique.)