I've really enjoyed the story so far and the pacing is well done. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but they are barely noticeable. Overall, I would recommend it to a friend and am excited for more updates. Please keep writing!

Really good first chapter! I was just somewhat confused with, "Lydia brought them to a stop." Who is Lydia?

This is a great story so far and definitely interesting. The writing style is well done and easy to follow along. Keep up the good work I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hi it's me, the author Writing this story is a blast and I have big plans for Ozul's future. I love reading everyone's comments and reviews, it keeps me motivated! This is my first Webnovel so if you have any constructive criticism please let me know! I am always improving my writing style so it'll change a bit as the story progresses. Thanks for all the support!

I really love both the flow of this novel and the characters so far. The story is interesting, and it grabs my attention. Please continue writing!

This has been a great read and I can't wait for what happens next! I love the dynamic between the characters and the flow of the book. It is easy to read and full of great dialogue.

Even though this genre is heavily written about, the author does a great job of framing it in a new and refreshing way. The dialogue seems real, and the world building is well done. Please keep up the good work and continue writing!