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At first it was good.then after chap 30 it becomes very bad when author use some guy who uses forest type of fruit in canon I forget his name.THan they survive by luck.After that author decided to give Liam a devil fruit which I can't understand properly it becomes very boring for me.either you give him a god df or don't give him any what's up with that df.And author don't describe Liam strength that much.just saying he is weaker than Zoro and Luffy but how much far behind is he? We have no idea.I am honestly surprised this fic has such high rating lol.
First of all first few chapters are full of cringe.Like the chapter4 that chapter doesn't make any sense.After that interaction with ino.Naruto flirt with ino was pretty good but there were some cringe moment I bet author is some one recently fall in love xd.System doesn't make any sense at first but author fixed it in later chapter.Fight scene is pretty good.apart from first few chaps latter chapter were good.And what good is author didn't follow canon.In 20-30chap the story turn 180degree at least it is interesting as of now. For the Grammer part First few chaps were horrible.But it gradually become good. FOR interaction between characters well it's not forced apart from chap 4. As of now story is pretty interesting.i am enjoying. From the 1st to 30 anyone can see author improvement.well best of luck .