DaoistSouL13

Back on this platform after many days but pff!!! Roo never disappoints me, I'm blown away by the plots 😵✨ p.s your editor rang me up, he's free now >~<

Overall everything's tight in sight.....You have really got better, and you can get even better in the future.... Also while giving the plot into your story, You really thought about the readers; that how they'll like it .. (Great things don't need much appreciation) ✌🏻

This chap 🤣👀

Liked everything ✌🏻 The storyline is so good. The chars and setting is good too. Just give details to few things and correct the typos and what u call so😏... Haha, o'er all great work done (highly recommended) ♥️

So far so good. Everything is so good including the awesome storyline but i gotta say WORK ON UR GRAMMAR. O'er all u are doing good, i really look forward to read more :)

Overall it's an amazing story hope it gets better with the chapters..I can't wait to read more, the setting as well as the grammar is good. (p.s I'm recommending this story to mah friends, i liked it hope they'll too)

I really liked the plot. The combination of the ancient world and the modern world is just too good; ig this will be like other book of yours i.e. POPULAR ;) (p.s recommending this book to my friends if u continue writing [ik u will] :)

So far so good. I really enjoyed the starting (I'm outta words; no words can define this masterpiece) i really hope i get to read more stories from you miss :) (p.s all the best ✌🏻✨)

Really like the storyline; the way you delivered the story was just awesome. I hope i get to read such beautiful creations by you Ganbari tsudzukeru ~!~ Miss sana manalo ka talaga!!!!

I'm really happy that you're participating with this book. TBH i started this book a week 2 ago, but again this book was so addictively good that i kept reading. I finished reading I really think actually hope that this book wins. Lots of love to this book as well as you miss ♥️✨ (p.s I have recommended this book to as many as possible, i really hope it'll help)