King_lucifer

Well I am glad you replied, I appreciate your effort and at the end this is your story and you have every right of creative freedom, just make sure that leads have some ambition. I am tired of web novel authors making their mc want to retire somewhere quiet, when they have so much power to rule.

I was quite enjoying the story, but I simply don't understand why you thought of adoption when the mc and fl are both young. It feels like you are trying to unnecessarily add burdens to the MC which were not required. They could have their own child way down the story line. I feel you wanted to write a slice of life story but midway changes to action. I feel no ambition from both MC and FL, I mean what's the point of reading further if they just want to quietly spend their life even after having so much power. I just hope you add some kingdom building or world dominance but it's your choice.

I like the story till now, mc is likable too. Just want to know if you will continue this or just abandon it?

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

At least learn how to correctly write in english first, second thing I said what I wanted from this book it was just a suggestion why are you getting hyper. Coming to the ratio you are talking about, are you an idiot is webnovel the only place where books are published.

Hey the author the story is good but I feel there is one problem. The MC jumps to save everyone like goody two shoes. Could you make some changes on that I mean if you dont want to make him villain atleast make him anti hero. Always this trope of helping is boaring man, otherwise the story has potential keep it up

Author, Its a nice story but I don't like the MC bowing his head to any kind of royalty. If possible I would like him to be an anti hero type leader and take control of the kingdom or something. I always feel the mc of fantasy novel help when needed and fade into background.