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sushikiller1yrCommentedi click continue reading and then it lead me here. Literally forgot what chap I was
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I literally forgot what chapter I last read
World name: Terra - sushikiller1yrCommented
you added the fish part. Cat would be so proud
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it is, i believe
This paragraph has been deleted. - sushikiller1yrReplied to sushikillerCh -1 Prologue-1: Loris.
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dam, his potential if only he had the courage and positivity
The fortune of being blessed with great genes. Paradoxically, what Loris had not considered determining obsessed him every day of the past three years. Since his abject failure broke his pride and shattered his seemingly boundless urge to conquer. - sushikiller1yrCommented
and also such a huge disturbance to his sunbathing or resting ot whatever he's doing
Loris sighed. Such a waste of merits. - sushikiller1yrCommented
there is no hope without life, no will without hope, and no effort without wil-
Staring at the void, lying a step away, Loris wondered how he got there. Was there ever any hope? - sushikiller1yrCommented
that was literally traumatizing
Closing his eyes briefly, he had visions of the nightmare that haunted him day and night. Of his young self drowning in a virtual lake. Each blink reminded him of how scared he was of dying. Pathetic. - sushikiller1yrCommented
stratum
Even on the outskirts of a city whose hidden heart remained exclusive to the upper caste, some buildings towered over other infrastructures sixty metres high at best. An embodiment of the meritorious' privilege for whom the rules differed. - sushikiller1yrCommented
rip
The resulting trauma would scar him for eternity. - sushikiller1yrCommented
fudge, he should have set it as an ocean instead, if he's just gonna skip the beginners level
Loris was overly reckless and prideful at that time, like any other young Merigenians. In his first fully immersive virtual swimming session, he disobeyed his mother's instructions and set up a lake instead of a kindergarten pool. In the panic, he forgot it was nothing but virtual. - sushikiller1yrCommented
wasted my dam tears for this kid, dem
The young child was Loris. He had yet to celebrate his 5th birthday, and it was one of his first experiences with virtual reality. - sushikiller1yrCommented
hello darkness my old friend
His body sank further into the depths. Where light had no place. - sushikiller1yrCommented
a twig or something please let something for the kid to grab on......
Not to avail. - sushikiller1yrCommented
the kid is a fighterrr
Every new breath of air was a victory, with his nose now mostly submerged. In great dismay, he swallowed a mouthful and spat out some of the water, trying to suck in immense lumps of air. - sushikiller1yrCommented
a creative and expressive way to describe drowning
Tears rolled down his little cheeks as he tried his utmost to swim to the nearest land. He somehow floated, but could barely keep his head above water as the waves he created threw him back and forth. His agitated moves didn't help as tiny water jets poured through his nostrils, forcing him to swallow a noseful. He coughed up the murky liquid through the same orifice, nearly choking on it. - sushikiller1yrCommented
demn, who left their baby there
A child screamed. This spreading despair would make any heart quiver. Yet nobody came. The wilderness prevailed over the lake and its surroundings.