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OffTheGrid2211mthPostedOk the book is awesome. The story is very interesting and other than the dog becoming a human/zombie I love. But when I get to chapter 234 the page goes blank or all black and there is nothing left to read. The last thing I read was I really fucked a dog then there is nothing left to read. It is all black. I've complained about this but get no response. I was enjoying this story till now ,but then it just ends. It's like no one gives a dam. So I'm going to delete this book and encourage others not to even read this book if you can't get past chapter 233. If the end of chapter 233 us all you get this story is not worth the time and effort it takes to read. to just leave a person hanging really sucks .
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this Author knows nothing about horse and buggy or carriage. people don't mount the horse they ride in the buggy behind the horse. did you even bother to see how they did that back in the day.
After loosening it, he helped Hazel and Aiden mount the horse as they were sitting on top of it right now. Then Ethan mounted the horse also sitting in front...that's where he was supposed to sit since he was the one that was gonna put the horse in motion. - OffTheGrid2211mthCommented
why do you insist on telling us how they came to be in their twenties. most of us can do math. they were in their 18-19 years old so they would be in their mid twenties after 7 years. this is something for the reader to figure out, not the Author.
The two servants were just like family to the Dankworth family. And both of them were in their 'twenties. As known, Alora was 18 years old when she started working for their family. But seven years had passed since then, so she was 25 now...but she was still looking so pretty and sexy. - OffTheGrid2211mthCommented
now this is a really stupid question. obviously she is there with her mom. you were just asking if they were related. that elder isn't very smart.
"Who are you here with?". - OffTheGrid2211mthCommented
obviously we know that gloomy means their children didn't get awakened. you said that about 3 or 4 times now.
As time passed, some of the officials left with different facial expressions...gloomy and elated facial expressions. Only about three of them had gloomy expressions plastered on their faces. And why is that? Their children didn't awaken a single ability. - OffTheGrid2211mthCommented
yeah you already said how old he was.
He could now walk properly, he was a year and months old baby, so his mum didn't have to carry him at all after they came out of the carriage. She just held his hand along with his sister's hand as they strolled. - OffTheGrid2211mthCommented
would you stop repeating yourself and I don't need to know every last little detail. If it's a 5 hours to walk there say it takes 5 hours to walk there.
The people heading in that direction consisted of adults and kids, so they were heading toward the temple for the awakening. Now, they started embarking on the journey on time, their house wasn't too far from the temple. But on getting there, see the number of people that were heading toward the direction of the temple. - OffTheGrid221yrPosted
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when are we getting back to the main story?
It was a profane and unsettling sight. The clouds churned above, their movement intense and angry. Not once in its long history had Pascen seen a stormfront like this. Benadora looked out over the rocky landscape that once promised so much to the hardy people who endured the environment. The gnarled ground had become even more impassable. The angular ridges of the underlying rock breaking from their confines and jutting out into the air as deadly spikes. - OffTheGrid221yrCommented
I would be so Angry at her. who gave her the right to ask such a thing. No way NO NO NO NO NO!
Lily looked at Jordan and got down on her knees, which was to the shock of everyone. "Please… give Hailey a second chance." - OffTheGrid221yrCommented
I wouldn't even let her get out of bed. I would of said if she didn't know how much that kind of betrayal hurt and what it felt like she didn't have the right to make such a request. Then I would of told her everything Hailey had done including trying to make Jordan a backup lover witch would prove how unfaithful Hailey would always be. Key word is ALWAYS. Her already deceased brother had known right to get involved in such a thing. Finally just because you are dying doesn't give you the right to ask me such a thing and if she would insisted on asking me to not divorce unfaithful Hailey who would always want to have side lovers like her friend Rachel. I would of left and went home and called a lawyer.
Lily said, "Help me… get up from the bed." - OffTheGrid221yrCommented
That's a request no one should have a right to ask even if they are on their death bed. Does this old lady even know how much Hailey has hurt Jordan. First she cheats on him then she blames him for cheating and demands an apology then she tries to turn him into a backup lover all the while blaming someone else as for why she got caught. The answer is no Aunt Lily.
Lily breathed slowly and said, "Don't… don't… divorce Hailey." - OffTheGrid221yrCommented
u would call the police to have her removed .
Jordan began to give the chauffeur instructions, but when Hailey went out into the courtyard, she got on her knees again and said, "Jordan, I can't won't get up until you forgive me!" - OffTheGrid221yrCommented
love it
Pablo whispered to Leonard before leaving, "If Mr. Jordan is harmed in any way during the wedding, I will make sure you and your entire family gets buried together!" - OffTheGrid221yrCommented
Don't they use miles in America?
Hence, Victoria stepped hard on the gas pedal, and the speed of the car instantly increased to 100 kilometers per hour. She even constantly overtook several vehicles, all for the sake of meeting Mr. Steele sooner! - OffTheGrid221yrCommented
I would certainly have a lawyer there to make sure the divorce was done properly so there were no longer any problems in the future.
The lawyer's office gave each of them a purple divorce certificate. - OffTheGrid221yrCommented
what a bitch
Hailey retorted furiously, "I've been so good to you, but you're still so muddled up! Do you know that I have plenty of suitors now and will still continue to in a few more years!?! You should be grateful that I've chosen you! Yet, you're still haggling over an apology? You will never hear an apology from me for the rest of your life!" - OffTheGrid221yrCommented
Don't even go there
For them, it might really be a blessing!