I really hope you guys enjoy the story! It's a work in progress, but I hope you find the plot, characters, and storylines interesting! Have fun reading!

Thank you for the feedback! I sincerely hope you enjoy what is to come, and how Dakota grows as a person!

Thanks for the review! Rei is my favorite, and she's the one who I have developed most so far. Glad she caught your attention!

Pretty good overall! I really enjoyed reading. I can really identify with some of the characters, and I loved the plot progression! I enjoyed the fact that there were little to no spelling/grammar errors as well (my OCD hates that, so kudos)

I really liked the story in general! I do think the characters are a little shallow and under-developed (no offence) taking into account the stereotypical couple details (I do this all the time too though) and the world seems a bit vague. Other than that, I loved the plot!