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_Feanor_1yrCommentedAt one point it's said "I felt the love", and it's probably meant to be in the third person.
Arcane symbols appeared below Zell's feet and a bright light emanated from them. The light grew and expanded until it completely engulfed the duo. Inside Zell's mind his memories came crashing back to him. He remembered his life as Gary, his family, his children, his grandchildren, he remembered all of it. His years of hard labor. All the choices he had made good and bad. He could feel all the emotions he once felt as if it were the first time. I felt the love he had for his wife. He felt the paternal instincts and pride towards his children. As his life flashed before him, he was filled with joy and happiness. Until he reached his retirement. He relived the moment of discovery of his families' corpses. Great pain and anguish replaced any other feeling. And he screamed out in unbearable pain. "No! My Family!" He yelled. Tears began to pour down his cheeks as he was losing control.- _Feanor_1yrCommented
Okay, I guess the right way to put it is "the slightest blunder in my act would force me to take the exam, and since I can't read or write, my results wouldn't be good enough even for the worst school ever.
So Jason made up his mind and decided to continue to let everyone believe that he was still blind by faking it until the exam ended. The slightest blunder would make him write the theoretical exam normally. That would destroy his dream of attending the worst possible high school at the least. - _Feanor_1yrCommented
I'm trying very hard to see this and the next paragraphs about women as the MC's opinion, and not the author's. But for some reason I'm inclined to believe both the author and his MC never had the company of a 20-year old woman. They are fine, bro. They are just fine.
Women at twenty can be compared to peaches—good to look at but not yet ripe. - _Feanor_1yrCommented
I'd really like to know the reason for this to be possible.
Secondly, he could still access the system's interface despite being classified as an NPC. This suggested that he could still level up like a player, which was good news. - _Feanor_1yrCommented
Yes! As usual, MC is stupid.
"Am I stupid‽ That's the least of my concerns!" Han Xiao slapped himself. - _Feanor_1yrCommented
As someone said in this thread, there's no way for a game to be competitive as long as million-dollars gear is available for purchase. EA and other companies are heavily criticized for less.
Being an extremely popular game, good balance was of the utmost important. While big spenders did have certain advantages, it was not so unfair to the extent that it displeased the casual players. Maintaining competitiveness and improving skills were key factors towards game balance, and Galaxy did a good job in these areas, facilitating its strong allure as an e-sport. - _Feanor_1yrCommented
"A yukata 'lit. bathrobe' is an unlined cotton summer kimono, worn in casual settings such as summer festivals or nearby bathhouses." So yeah, not a fighting garment. For dojo practice, you wear a keikogi, or gi for short.
The attack passed under him bringing about small winds that caused his yukata to blow up slightly. - _Feanor_1yrCommented
I've seen people taking morphine after having kidney stones and they get so high they don't even remember their names for at least 15 minutes. A little research goes a long way.
"He was wearing a black overcoat and a black mask. He was wielding two guns simultaneously so as far as I can guess, he must be a gunslinger. The thing is right before the assault began, some kind of a mist surrounded me and I couldn't see what was going on that well." - _Feanor_1yrCommented
He better hope the "system" is a gift. If I was granted a system, the first thing I would want to know is who bestowed it upon me.
Once I have learnt the way the current world works and have become powerful enough. That will be the turning point for the human race. I will use the power I have been granted by the system to get strong. To protect those that I care about and slay those that oppose me. - _Feanor_1yrCommented
Yeah, dad's dying so I'm A LITTLE saddened, but leaving home for 10 years to train makes sense so...
With this, I was a little saddned, but what they had said made sense. I decided that I would take this opportunity to learn about the world. Afterall knowledge was key for me. There were many things I needed to find out and perhaps this would give me my answers. - _Feanor_1yrCommented
I'm not against cliffhangers. But in this case the author uses it as a means to beg for power stones. It doesn't even feel like the author enjoys writing.
Time to see how far he could push himself. - _Feanor_1yrCommented
A fearsome black dragon used an energy manipulation skill to...swat a human being? Is that how a dragon shows how powerful he is compared to a puny human?
A loud shout came out of the dragon in human form as it casted [Esoteric Energy Manipulation], forming a transparent fly swatter in the air that smashed into the body of the shocked Kazuhiko - _Feanor_1yrCommented
It took me some time to realize this is a Lit-Dungeon Crawler novel, but now that I did, I'm finally enjoying it. Earning ridiculous amount of money, having everlasting stamina and being able to rush through a 30 floor dungeon reminds me of my Diablo days, so it's relatable to me, at least. I'd be grateful if Author-san would let me know that first-hand, though. I wasn't expecting respawning monsters and such.
I realized the pain of normal hunters and why most of them only dived into dungeons once or twice at most a day. Me rushing down while mowing enemies left and right still required me to spend a few minutes on each floor. There being so many floors and monsters, the hunters in a party had to put their lives on the line to kill monsters on each floor while resting to recover their energy and heal up right after - _Feanor_1yrCommented
Okay so this is a Diablo-type novel where monsters keep spawning no matter how many times you clear a dungeon. And MC is a cheater who can have passive/channeling skills working non stop, INCLUDING IN HIS SLEEP. Yeah, let's hope he doesn't find passive skill books that increase his stats, or he's gonna crash the server.
Ch 7 Too easy - _Feanor_1yrCommented
A quick description, like "a dark-skinned man with a scar on his left eye, a blond man with a long nose and a fair skinned man with long hair" would be much better than "Hunter A, B and C".
"Just ignore him, who knows, maybe he's one of those prodigies that can solo an F rank dungeon? Haha" Hunter C - _Feanor_1yrPosted
I'm giving this novel an overall 4 because for it to deserve a 5 it would require at least Solo Leveling or The Beginning After the End quality. There are a few grammar flaws which are excusable since the writer is not a native speaker, but a little care goes a long way so I would advise a full revision. About the plot, it's your basic weak to strong isekai trope, but it's got merits. It's engaging and keeps you interested. Worth reading.
- _Feanor_1yrReplied to Nobre157Ch 9 GOD AMONGST GODS
- _Feanor_1yrReplied to Homelander69
Now that you mention it, they do have similarities. Kurou's personality is a bit darker, though. Jack Sparrow is the best!
Kurou laughed together with them, a fake laughter that made all of them stop and look at him with an inquisitive face. As soon as they stopped laughing, Kurou looked at the guy who was talking about the assault and asked in a loud voice.