Breath catching, to say the least. The moment I finished Nobu's flashback (Chapter 4), I realized that this fiction might, probably, have the potential to become really known! I really enjoyed the world-building as well. The magic system seems a tiny bit different as well. Anyway, to summarize, I think this novel has the potential. Keep it up, can't wait for the next chapters ^^

The story is thoroughly enjoyable as the characters are engaging and the author expertly places them in captivating scenarios. The characters' emotions are portrayed exceptionally well, allowing readers to experience their elation and contentment, as well as their apprehension and discomfort. This skillful portrayal of the characters' emotions puts the readers in their shoes, making the story more immersive. The recent chapters are particularly impressive as the author has succeeded in evoking a strong sense of discomfort in me. BOY, you made me cry ngl XD. I'll recommend it to my pals as well, Keep it up man, your work is really enjoyable ^^

Idk I didn't finish the whole thing. I'll do my best to try and figure out what's missing in the story so you could put it into consideration

The plot is unique and has the potential to become pretty known ngl. Actually, it's my first time reading a novel mentioning "Incubuses", that was really something. Still, there are a lot of perverted characters and disturbing descriptions, that didn't really catch my interest. But great work author, keep it up ^^

The plot is quite something, to say the least. At first, I didn't get what was going on, but things started getting clear to me at the end of the second chapter. Great character design (Especially The traveler for me), not to mention the writing quality. The fighting scenes are really impressive as well. Keep it up ^^

Hello! Sorry for the late reply. I would gladly work with you, there's nothing to lose by giving it a try after all. Thank you!