Wynwalker_Mcstubby

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Meh mc seems overly complicated with his three sets of memories could of just fused them all into a new personality so we don’t get this guy who’s so afraid of himself he puts up mental blocks

Survivors guit or not whatever it is makes reading about the mc down right maddening it’s the authors story so he can do as he wishes but I just can’t wrap my head around it I just hope it ends soon and mc can change for the better and use the time till plot starts to learn how to better him self otherwise I can’t see this story being at all enjoyable for me to read

Tbh if he don’t start to change I’ll just stop reading I can’t stand this type of mc who has all the knowledge of what’s wrong with them the power to overcome it but still refuses to change life’s hard and unfair but to waste a opportunity that’s been given to him is horrible and down right hard to read or relate to

Thanks for that chapter

All I can say is I love your storytelling it’s simply refreshing to read your stories your ability to balance romance and action is really something missing from other stories I’ve read keep up the great work

Thanks for the chapterter

Thanks for the chapter

Completely agree in a world with super powers putting your hand over or in some fire is like nothing worse that could happen would of been a slight burn everyone’ s reaction is just silly

Thank you for finishing this amazing fic sad to see it go but look forward to more from you in the future