ElVerdadero

It's one of those stories you come across and say, “Hey, it's a Suits story, let's read it,” and then you're left really impressed. I don't know if the author is a lawyer or just really good at writing about laws and dramatic speech patterns, but this story is very well written. You can tell you can tell that the author put a lot of effort and dedication into the writing. I just hope that they can continue to write at this level. In conclusion, I really liked the story, and I just hope that the author continues to write like this. Thanks for reading.

Just imagine the scene, like in a video game with a dark video filter style like a movie and the song “Bad Boys (Theme from Cops)” playing. That can only mean one thing: the most epic mission in this awesome game is coming, and as Fede El Lobo said, “Puchela Play.”

I feel that what you say has a point, but don't you think it's realistic that a person in a moment of stress might say things they shouldn't? What the author did seems to me to be something that isn't right, but isn't wrong either. I even find it refreshing to say it because it's a way of not carrying the whole burden and allowing true friendships to form in the story, because although it's true that we all have secrets, our closest friends know things that are deeply personal. In conclusion, the theme of what he says about the system is an almost innovative concept and something that I hope the author knows how to manipulate to make his interpersonal relationships deeper.

Starting with everything is one of those stories with specific moments, like any story. There are points to improve and points to take into account. 1-I like the power system; it's a somewhat innovative way of giving power to a character in these times. 2-I like the attitude and the way the protagonist assimilates this new world and these new responsibilities with his new powers and their virtues and great consequences. 3-I think it's accurate how the protagonist manages his emotions and how he expresses them realistically in his new life and how being in a fictional world and being alone affects people. 4-Finally, I would like to clarify the main strength I see in the story: the way it portrays how a person with power can become addicted to it. That is what attracted me most to the story. Obviously, like any story, it has flaws, but with these four points, it is far above other fan fiction stories. So, at the end of everything I wrote, only this matters: for the author, you are doing well, keep going. Thank you for reading.

Based on the character description, and using the greatest invention of the 21st century, the Internet, I created this image of what he would look like, awaiting confirmation from the author whether it's a thumbs up or thumbs down.

I think it's a very well done story. An average Red Dead 2 fan would like to keep reading it simply for the fact that it's from their favorite video game. One of the things I like is that the system is adapted to the power level of the video game, where the protagonist, just like us in the game, must learn everything from the beginning, even if we have already played the sequel to the video game, Red Dead Redemption 1. I really like this approach and, as a reader of Fan-Fic stories, I like this story and hope to keep reading it. Thank you.

I loved the story, it has a very original premise and also touches on a very delicate subject such as religion and takes the most delicate religion in this sense the Christian, which has been branded by many people as a business rather than a place of holiness and faith. This story takes place in a world ruled by kingdoms in medieval times, where religions but the Catholic-Christian took its greatest strength and where he did more "atrocities", and the author takes the world of Game of Thrones a place marked by the religion of the Seven, which is very marked in Game of Thrones. My recommendation, the story is very good, let's hope it continues like this, 5 stars for this story, THANK YOU.

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This story unlike others I've read where the protagonist is given a system which will give him the skills of the most famous and talented players in history, this one changes this because although the protagonist has something similar these skills are only earned with dedication and self effort.in the opinion of a fan reading fan stories this story deserves my rating.