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I had read this story before and saw that new chapters were released, I was wondering why I dropped this story. Then I remembered, zero character development, I see that the author expresses emotions in the characters, but there was development of the world and the MC, it looks like a child wants to write A story with him as the main character.
Well... I think it's obvious that it's a translation, however, in general it's better than most of the traditions on this site, I like the proposal of this ff, I hope it doesn't focus too much on something serious, Since the MC system is very op, anyway, in general I liked it, just some grammatical errors in the tradition, MC name, characters, etc. I'm waiting for more🙏🏾
I read it completely, and honestly? I regret it, the MC's attitudes are not coherent or even follow a thin line of logic, Until the arc of the Ben 10 universe improved, and if he had stayed there the story might have been saved, but that's it, he goes back to his world and returns to being the same stupid person. I was looking for a story about the Ben 10 universe, out of pure nostalgia, but I didn't like it and apparently everyone hated the way it was executed, the idea is good, but that's it...🤷🏾♂️