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Me gusta si el castigo es adecuado, yo le hubiera quitado más punto por la amenaza de "asato s3xu**" porque eso es lo que iban hacer no importa si lo dejan guindando en algun lugar. Estas quitandole la ropa encontra de su voluntad y exponiendolo.... xD (esto se esta poniendo bueno) En mi mente Fuyoshi, veo a Severus jugando con sus mentes y atandolos para enseñarles quien es el maestro y quien los leoncitos que deben obedecer. =P

He got some balls in there!!!!! 🤣 Nobody can denied 🤣

U give me a heart attack emotional!!!! My poor Coby... well is not in danger so I'm relieve I guess 😅😗💕 Cool chapter 👍

I hope that this story continue is a amazing good!!!!! I want to see how Luffy and Coby will meet and interact. I also like the way you've handled the plot without breaking away from the One Piece world. Although I'm still anxious if Coby will meet Luffy first or when he's on the original voyage. And Nami?.........will this Coby go help her before Luffy or will he wait to do the whole plot with them originally. I have a lot of ideas in my head that I would like to see and I hope to see at least half of them in your fanfic.

And what kind of fruit it is??? Is the Gomu or some new power created for the trama???

Love this episode!!!!!!! My baby Coby !!!!!! 🥺💕 You almost make me cry xD Beautifull really ❤😊

These parents were invented by you, weren't they... or are they the official names of their parents because I don't know if they ever mention that detail. I wish the house wasn't so damaged you know... as to be preserved in case Coby needs it later in the story. 🏡

Okey I thought that the boy would not return to the Dojo until many years later... why would Coby still be there...? I keep thinking I don't know what you'll do with Zoro and his swords I'm scared and excited. I don't know if this Coby will try to cross Luffy or Nami...? but I'm anxious to know what's in store for him even though he can defend himself now I wonder if he'll be able to fight off any enemy that might try to attack him on his way home. [img=update][img=recommend]

I think maybe they only get territorial when in the presence of supernatural powers... just like Luffy and Shanks.... For that very reason you say. They're huge normal humans wouldn't stand a chance of surviving facing those things. Ooh... that they're only in certain parts of the ocean and as it were that fool and Luffy got into their territory and that's why he attacked them in general. I mean if we look at pirate stories like Sinbad and stuff... the sea monsters lived in certain parts of the ocean and they were forbidden maritime routes for men if you didn't want to die and so...

Well I don't think that you would let her aniversario because... Zoro need her 3 swords and take her dream like his...