iIdont like his attitude I'm disappointed, it's like losing your humanity he doesn't care about the lives of others ok m about to drop this

I'll drop this bro the description of things in the novel is too long

author nice jobit was nice, thank you

i like mei hatsume

there's a lot of major plot holes iIwas considering dropping thisi just can't find a good novel that I'm induring reading this, it's like there's a chicken in front of you, it's not only bland with no flavor it's even slightly raw,

it's kinda confusing

idropped it and tried it again but it's just not right iIdont like the writing

my imagination is running wild I'm imagining that he's dad ntr him after he died I know I have a bad imagination I'm worried about the girls though hope the family took care of them

yeah

MOOOORRRREEEE!!!!!

lol

too rush ganna drop

yeah

mc is too arrogant

ganna drop this I don't like the way this is going

mcs kinda dumb he should have picked the skill book

no one ganna talk about how that glass broke just like that for the plot HES SACRIFICE MUST NOT BE IN VAIN!!!

not really it's too short and it's probably because you just killed a new character after seconds of it's introduction it fells like some stranger on the news that died I only feel a little sorry for the girl but won't cry it's the type of matter that the next hour or so you would forget

yeah you should really make it longer ty for the chap it's good

it looks good 👍😊 ganna keep reading I have high hopes for this novel and author pls upload More chapter and thanks for the chapter