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MJ_Q10mthPostedI just started reading this and it is a very commonly seen topic in many stories but the writing style of this author and storyline, world background, and female leads intrigue me to read more. It does have very good language, names, and dialogues that are very simple to understand for basic English speakers. I recommend reading this if you are a fan of the strong female lead, magic, prophecy, European historical setup, and action romance. I will surely follow this story to the end because I want to know how Vera becomes a king from a woodcutter.
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Be a man Ceasar... ask her
The room was immersed in silence, nobody dared to talk. Their fear was visible, the room itself trembled. Abruptly the door opened. It was Helga and Laisa, they entered the room. Seeing Helga in her gorgeous pink and white gown, smiling lovingly at him, Ceasar stood up. his heart flattered forgetting everything and blood rushed to his cheeks, turning them red. He couldn't take his eyes off her, she is his love, unrequited love. He didn't dare to confess learning the hardship she had been through and learning her future pursuits. He is still waiting for a moment, when he can open his heart and show her the infinite affection he obscures in his heart for her, to ask her "Will you marry me, my lady?" - MJ_Q10mthCommented
So Vera is the prophecy child...
"Are we forgetting the prophecy? The era my power manifests a boy of my lineage starts the doom of this land A great war will occur, evil will rise, and everything will burn to ashes, Void is coming!" those were the last recorded words of the great hero Morier Leighann," fearfully clutching his hands Jugo commented. - MJ_Q10mthCommented
There was a witness? nice
"Coming back to our discussion, Ceasar, the boy we are searching for is the future of Loistava. He was born to my husband the late king of Loistava, Willard Fermi Leighann and his lover Raya. For the past decade, I was looking for him everywhere and finally, we got a believable clue from Nek-asrof. It is common knowledge among the folks of every nation, that the Leighann possess the blessing of god La and the ones who wield the power are born with golden eyes and only belong to the Leighann clan. None of the princes gained it nor did his princesses except one, the boy born to Raya. He is the heir blessed by La, the true crown prince or king of Loistava. It was the reason for Logan's evil deed, the annihilation of his brother's family. Nevertheless, two months after our escape, a refugee from Shoma (the capital of Loistava) revealed an intriguing tale. His eyes were the sole witness of an escape. He watched the kid run into darkness and disappear after burning the soldier who caught him to ash with his bare hand, while his delicate body was drenched in fresh wounds," baffled Ceasar and Jugo glanced speechlessly. They couldn't believe what they just heard. Looking at each other perplexed, Ceasar questioned; "Your Highness, do you mean that (gulp) the prophecy... it is true? Morier Leighann, his legacy is back. The manipulator of fire," - MJ_Q10mthCommented
Classic knight hero... but we will take him...
"Yes, it is. Finding the heir of Loistava, an incredible mission indeed," the young man riding a black horse replied, his eyes were glowing emerald rocks while his face glowed like a thousand suns. He was the most handsome man in that nation. Golden hair, muscular and well build body, a perfect specimen of nobility and masculinity, the eldest son of Count Franklin Arkellis, Ceasar Arkellis, a twenty-two-year-old knight. - MJ_Q10mthCommented
Political marriage but they were on good terms... nice...
"I am aware that your father, Helga... he was a very forthright and compassionate man. He had never experienced love before we met and had no concept of what it was. He entered into agreements with many nations for Loistava's peace and prosperity through all of his matrimonies. Even though he was my husband, I am aware that he never truly loved me the way a wife would hope for, yet he never caused me to feel uneasy or hostile. He treated me similarly to how he treated himself, as his greatest friend and someone he could rely on. In all honesty, he gave me you and a life I never complained about, which is all I asked of him. He came to me one day, flushed like a red tomato, happy and shining. He claimed to have discovered a girl in the street and to have felt a tickling in his stomach, something moving in his heart. She was Raya, a woman of breathtaking beauty from across the ocean, whom everyone coveted. Their boy will undoubtedly be our future, I am confident. Without love, the Leighanns are unable to create the "perfect Leighann" heir. Therefore, that boy is the key, to the future," Catherine closed her eyes as she saw the big blue sky, birds singing in the nearby tree, and the pleasant breeze flitting here and there. "That boy is the symbol of their love, and that's why they perished when Logan discovered the boy," she said. Helga was perplexed by her mother's words, but she smiled when she caught her tender gaze. - MJ_Q10mthCommented
The king has some ulterior motives, it's sus...
The king has granted your request. He agreed to help you locate the late King Willard Fermi Leighann of Loistava's heir. He'll provide you with the defence and assistance you need. The kingdom of Egur has already been alerted of your arrival. The king wishes you luck in your endeavour. He does, however, have a requirement that he will only discuss with Loistava's successor. You must inform the king when you find him. And he will only reveal so when the time comes. Do what you must do and be cautious on your way. Count Arkellis' eldest lord Grand Cross Kinight Ceasar Arkellis will be responsible for your safeness. They will arrive in the morning. Travel safely, my beloved daughter and Helga. I shall await your response. - MJ_Q10mthCommented
She is beautiful... My lady...
"I understand your concern, Laisa. But I have to locate him. Prior to them, I need to locate my brother." Her blue eyes were bright with resolve. She sprinted outside the exquisitely carved window to see an incredible open garden full of different fruit trees, flowering plants, a fountain, ponds, and meticulously maintained garden bushes. There were geese, ducks, peacocks, and rabbits running throughout the yard. Helga's pink lips raised in a grin as she let the gentle breeze dance through her long, wavy black hair, and her eyes caught sight of someone in the garden. - MJ_Q10mthCommentedCh 3 History
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That's interesting
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boy can use fire...
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Good start, Brave mother
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Story is really fascinating. The writing style is very flexible and creative. I loved how the story progress centering the protagonist. It's a bit slow process but I find it surely enjoyable. Keep it going like this.
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It was a bit confusing at first but I think I am getting it now...
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sorry, I didn't mention that... thank you...
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