Viola_Bear
of reading
12
Read books
she is very lucky
poor Ivy
up to you. i don't care
i found too much words oh from chapter 3 to chapter 5
too long ummm
You should write father using Father not father.
no comma after what for?
using dot after before " the punctuation is make confused
too much words oh in this chapter
it is not need using #### or something like that
try to improve your grammar and chinese language
I don't understand with your story. Make me really confused
what the ...
where is the dialogue tag?
Areumdaum Yeoja
duh maunya apa sih Dee?