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Legendary!!!! So well written! One of my favorite stories. I always get excited when i see a chapter update

wowwwwwww.... i thought my eyes where playing tricks on me when i saw a chapter update. THANK U!!!

less romance. anyone notice how he met her and then then we have literally been reading about her and him thinking about her and their romance every five seconds? too much. i think romance is okay... but this feels a bit too forced... also this guys a baddass. i really really hope that the romance takes a back seat to the developing story.

how much money will it take for you to come back and continue with this fic? if u start a patreon I'll join immediately

just reread. miss this fic so much

overall I like the story... but honestly this chapter is poorly written

if you started a patreon... i would support. please continue this story!!!

I've been keeping up with the story. it's good. I enjoy it. for anyone reading this review. know that this story is an enjoyable read. If I may offer some critique. 1. it's not dark enough. this is the Shinobi world. people are killed and die all the time. realism and edginess. weariness in characters. manipulation. hiding abilities, backstabbing. it's lacking severely in this department. even with the whole Minato death and danzo thing. 2. kushina loses her Chakra and she suddenly becomes a helpless woman that needs to be coddled and cared for by her prepubscent son. she has no regards for her kids safety. no attempt to help him succeed so he can protect himself. she's like some ditsy wallflower that's living in some romcom 3. maybe try reading wind of calamity... see how the author narrates the character growing in power and technique. how realistic he makes it and how easy it is to follow along and invest in their growth. could help you a lot

absolutely brilliant story. I loved every second of it. thank you for bringing so much joy into my life.

this story is toooo good!!! I beseech u too drag it out as long as humanly possible. in an ideal world... I would still be reading this in 2050 on my death bed.