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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink1h
    Replied to Dashkins74

    It seems more logical to me to change Master Sunny from Nefis to Rin. The Shadow Friend attribute can completely compensate for the problems of shadow bonding. It would also strengthen the bond between Sunny and Nefis without making their relationship too weird.

    Ch 58 (ch58) first teammate
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink11h
    Commented

    So, what about Sunny's change of master?

    Ch 58 (ch58) first teammate
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink1d
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    There are few fanfics on shadow slave and even fewer good ones. The author knows the canon very well and has a great imagination. The written world feels alive and close in spirit to the original. The character of the characters from the source material has been retained. The original characters introduced are truly excellent. Mc in this fanfic is really extremely well thought out both in terms of abilities and character. It can be argued that this fanfic is the benchmark of shadow slave fanfics. P.s. it is worth noting that the author always answers questions about the content of the fanfic, this is very valuable

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    Book&Literature · FieryBaldachin
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink3d
    Replied to FieryBaldachin

    So why not just make telekinesis an awakened ability and postpone the problem even further?

    Ch 78 Chapter 78
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink3d
    Commented

    I recently read in past comments that you're going to make cryokinesis an awakened ability of dane, doesn't his Wight attribute already give it? And what about telekinesis? Are you going to make it an ascended ability?

    Ch 78 Chapter 78
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink7d
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter. It's interesting to see the other side of the Forgotten Shore conflict.

    Ch 78 Chapter 78
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink8d
    Commented

    Will the dane gain 1/10 essence when killing specters, like the ones Sunny met on the chained islands(fallen demon Chalice Maiden)?

    Ch 77 Chapter 77
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink9d
    Commented

    A variant for the aspect legacy dane - you can give it attributes for each of the seven, or you can give a new attribute with the first legacy and add attribute traits with each subsequent one. Given the overall level of divine legacies I would recommend the first option.

    Ch 77 Chapter 77
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink9d
    Commented

    It took me an unimaginably long time to realize that you're basing dane abilities on classic ghost abilities. Same telekinesis from poltergeists and cold as a standard element.

    Ch 77 Chapter 77
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink9d
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter. I look forward to the sequel

    Ch 77 Chapter 77
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink9d
    Commented

    Don't you think that along with the change in Sunny's character, as well as his way of getting past the first nightmare, his aspect of it should have changed as well? For a tougher Sunny, isn't he a little too soft on those around him? It seems like he's just more mature. I'm hoping for more significant changes in the future, for now what's happening looks like a repeat of canon. I'll be keeping an eye on this fanfic in hopes of positive changes.

    Ch 7 Rolling Waves
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink10d
    Commented

    Great chapter. Dane has started to take action. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Ch 76 Chapter 76
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink11d
    Commented

    Perhaps Nolan should be given a spear to compensate for his height

    Ch 75 Chapter 75
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink11d
    Commented

    By the way, didn't you think it made more sense to replace phantom fragments with heart fragments?

    Ch 75 Chapter 75
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink12d
    Commented

    Will Kai's ascended ability work on Dane, given Dane's flaw?

    Ch 75 Chapter 75
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink13d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. I look forward to the sequel. It's good to see Dane again

    Ch 75 Chapter 75
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink15d
    Commented

    What even happens when the dane becomes transcendent? Does he get another transformation ability? Will his current ability be modified? Or will he just get a regular aspect ability?

    Ch 74 Chapter 74
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink15d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. I'm still wondering how you'll solve the fateless problem.

    Ch 74 Chapter 74
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink17d
    Commented

    Have you thought about the aspect legacy of the Dane? Judging from what you've shown, the legacies for each of the divine aspects are completely unique.

    Ch 74 Sigh, It Happened Again.
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  • Kanobink
    Kanobink18d
    Replied to FieryBaldachin

    Will you give it to him? If you think about it that way, it's an imba, manipulating electricity should give at least rough access to the nervous system. Unless you put restrictions on it, like giving access only to atmospheric phenomena or limiting manipulation to only your own lightning.

    Ch 73 Chapter 73
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