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It seems more logical to me to change Master Sunny from Nefis to Rin. The Shadow Friend attribute can completely compensate for the problems of shadow bonding. It would also strengthen the bond between Sunny and Nefis without making their relationship too weird.
There are few fanfics on shadow slave and even fewer good ones. The author knows the canon very well and has a great imagination. The written world feels alive and close in spirit to the original. The character of the characters from the source material has been retained. The original characters introduced are truly excellent. Mc in this fanfic is really extremely well thought out both in terms of abilities and character. It can be argued that this fanfic is the benchmark of shadow slave fanfics. P.s. it is worth noting that the author always answers questions about the content of the fanfic, this is very valuable
A variant for the aspect legacy dane - you can give it attributes for each of the seven, or you can give a new attribute with the first legacy and add attribute traits with each subsequent one. Given the overall level of divine legacies I would recommend the first option.
Don't you think that along with the change in Sunny's character, as well as his way of getting past the first nightmare, his aspect of it should have changed as well? For a tougher Sunny, isn't he a little too soft on those around him? It seems like he's just more mature. I'm hoping for more significant changes in the future, for now what's happening looks like a repeat of canon. I'll be keeping an eye on this fanfic in hopes of positive changes.
Will you give it to him? If you think about it that way, it's an imba, manipulating electricity should give at least rough access to the nervous system. Unless you put restrictions on it, like giving access only to atmospheric phenomena or limiting manipulation to only your own lightning.